Dougla$Irishman's comments Page #14

A very deep and thoughtful
poem about one's self. We only have one chance at life, the proof is in the mix of the pudding ! Choose your ingredients well !

This is an adventure poem about seamen staying the course in a violent storm !
I felt as if I was there in the poem !
Thankyou for taking me on this sailing ship !

A dreamy poem well done ! Dreams are part of who we are. Some dreams seem so real, that you are glad you wake up ! There was a song of years ago Dream, Dream Dream by the Everly Brothers, check it out ! more »

This is a beautiful poem of reflection of things past but never forgotten.
They are itched in our hearts when tragedy comes into our families.
Thanks for sharing..

I have noticed with a lot of recent poets, they write the worse of life and drag it on !There is much beauty in the world and good things happening !
" I think I shall never see
A poem as lovely as a tree," more »

There is a time in life when you exceed your expectations like you did riding your horse ! Not many can say that, truth is far stronger then the best of fiction
Life is for the living and you did it !
Bravo for a very brave poem ! more »

An ode to a peach, I love it, playful ,entertaining, thoughtful, amusing and creative !
I love peach juice, my favorite ! My kingdom for a peach. !

This is a hard read, to have friends in life you must take the first step and be a friend to others .Have purpose in life like helping others in need
Take a positive step and believe in God, let Him take control of your life
Go to church, have fellowship with others, I challenge you ! more »

Find your life before it is to late, read John 3 verse 16 in the Bible
It can change your life, you have everything to gain and nothing to lose !
I pray for you everyday that God will change your heart more »

Quite the poem about being our brother's keeper !
We live in a very sinful world and it will only get worse not better !
But take a look, many people are helping out - Ukraine the center of death !
War is war and life is not precious anymore ! more »

Interesting poem about the rigors of being a human being !
Youth, middle age and then what ?
Old age facing the last frontier -eternal PAIN !
But if you still have a keen mind, life is livable and productive
Thanks again for your poignant poem ! more »

A folksy poem but always remember -
Be born once and you die twice
Born twice and you die once !
There is life after death, choose wisely !

Thanks for your very poignant poem about personal loss.
Most of us in time can deal with loss but not all.
They say time heals all wounds, with youth on your side I know you can do it !
Us older folks fight the battle every day with losses and not much time to heal !
Thankyou again for your poem.. more »

Very good reading here, talking about a Christian's walk in life !
Although our outer body is wearing out in life, our inner body is being renewed everyday ! The best is yet to come !
You are 43, I am 88 so you got a lot of living to do. Bravo! Write on. more »

A very innovative poem about the word sometime !
Sometime is better than no time but part time will not get the job done !
Full time is needed as things in life take time.
Sometime is out the window when showtime is on ! more »

A very innovative poem about life in general.
Sometime will get us somewhere but to get there we must work full time.
Part time is not recommended as life is a full time journey !
But sometime is better than no time ! more »

This poem is about young love, I am sure we have all been there, hey I have blue eyes ! Puppy love when you are a teenager is just like your poem !
Young love is so innocent and brave !
Thanks for your memory poem ,my girl friend was Susie, what a doozie ! more »

This is a very imaginative poem about people that have the same aims in life but each one chooses their own path !
Life is not fair, or unfair, it's how we react to life, what really it is !
Thankyou for your excellent poem ! more »

I agree with your readers, this is a poem worthy of note ! You have made imagination a needed element in our lives ! Dream on !

A real life poem, what a treasure to always keep !
When times get tough, take a look at the poem and realize the journey is still worth it all !
Seize the moment !

In Every Life, there is a puzzle ! Great for seniors getting those last few parts to fit. Once my cat hid my last part behind the sofa !
A wonderful poem to reflect on life !
I live in Canada too - Sarnia, Ont. more »

Wonderful poem ! Well thought out and a real blessing to read it !
You put everything into proper perfective, loving God first and other things in life will come !
A beautiful tribute to your dad !
Bravo for your next poem ! Inch by inch ! more »

Your poem is very reflective about happiness as an adult..
At 23 you are just starting out in life, welcome to the real world !
Happiness is a virtue you must pursue, you must make life happen ! ,
Good friends, hobbies and have a faith that sees you through in the dire straits.
All you need is a faith as large as a mustard seed ! more »

Heart warming poem about friends !
We will have many in a lifetime but those that still like us in spite of ourselves !
The test is - if a friendship ends it never began !
Your poem of 4 verses and 16 lines, says a lot in a short time. Bravo ! more »

Check out Alfred Kilmer's poem "Trees.'!
Two different thoughts here in both poems !
I think I shall never see
A poem as lovely as thee !