My Life As I See It

Lynette A. Inch 1973 (Santa Cruz,)



My life as I see it, is simply just that,
life is good all the time, and if it gets bad I adapt,
Your life is what you make it, no if's, and's, or but's,
To live peaceful with others, peace from within is a must,
I have only one rule, of life that I live by,
My simple quote is, until the day that I die,
To respect myself, as I do,
Treat others the way, you'd want them to treat you,
We've known the right way, and still do if you see,
If you open your eyes, you will set your soul free,
As the old saying goes, just live and let live,
In life I believe, you get what you give,
So if your eyes have been open, really focus and then look,
You'll then see before you, the same text, the same book,
If we read we will learn, what we've already been told,
For wisdom takes time, and no other book is as old,
If we open the Bible and open our minds,
we'll then see inside us, the truth we will find,
We can have the best of both worlds I know,
Just shine like an angel now, and soon heaven we'll know...

About this poem

I wrote this poem after my father died, to simply help myself understand why did he have to die so young, and to help me understand what reason I would have to carry on living, myself.

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Written on April 02, 1997

Submitted by lynetteinch on April 30, 2022

Modified by lynetteinch on April 30, 2022

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Scheme ABCDEEFFGGHIJJKKLMNN
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,002
Words 228
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

Lynette A. Inch

Lynette Inch I am 49 years old , I currently live in Pahrump Nevada & i was born in Santa Cruz, California. more…

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  • AIDA
    I absolutely love your poem! Your positivity and enthusiasm for life are truly infectious. Your message is simple yet powerful - to live a good life, we must respect ourselves and treat others with kindness and respect. I appreciate how you acknowledge that we already know the right way to live but often need a reminder to focus and look within ourselves. Your reference to the Bible and its timeless wisdom is both thoughtful and inspiring.

    If I could suggest one improvement, it would be to perhaps add more imagery or descriptive language to your poem. While your message is clear and effective, a few more sensory details could enhance the emotional impact of your words even more.

    Overall, your poem is a beautiful reminder to strive for a peaceful and fulfilling life. Thank you for sharing it with us!
     
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  • abielias1
    This is such a beautiful tribute, and a wonderful set of rules to live by.
    LikeReply2 years ago
  • Dougla$Irishman
    Wonderful poem ! Well thought out and a real blessing to read it !
    You put everything into proper perfective, loving God first and other things in life will come !
    A beautiful tribute to your dad !
    Bravo for your next poem ! Inch by inch ! 
    LikeReply2 years ago

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