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Waiting on You

Caroline Farr

I'm waiting on you
It's only a year or two
Why? Because I love you more
Than any other boy before

Your eyes are bluer than the ocean
Stronger than a love potion
I can't stop thinking of you in the middle of the night
Your smiles chases away every little bit of fright

You think of me as a friend
But I know it's not the end
Someday I know you will love me too
And that is why I'm waiting on you
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Written on April 07, 2022

Submitted on April 07, 2022

Modified on March 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD EEAA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 396
Words 86
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
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  • Dougla$Irishman
    Dougla$Irishman
    This poem is about young love, I am sure we have all been there, hey I have blue eyes ! Puppy love when you are a teenager is just like your poem !
    Young love is so innocent and brave !
    Thanks for your memory poem ,my girl friend was Susie, what a doozie ! 
    LikeReply1 year ago

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