Blue Melancholy of Hong Kong



Blue Melancholy of Hong Kong
By William He

A veil of purple vapour flows,
In fancy's misty gleam,
The sea spectral camp is seen.
The street light eyes are hollow,
Yet hook one's soul with a single glance.
A parlour of numb nerves ever.
The lattice pavilions rise and fall,
In the cloudy and tense air,
With the strange and mystic scroll.
The Central gigantic shapes and shadows swing.
Playing on a cracked saxophone,
A scotch waters the sorrow down.
Fluttering secret dreams on the sonata wings.
A ribbon of hard sound reverberates,
Despair tugs on spiritual strings.

Ferris Wheel's heart beats vibrantly.
Time slipping as if the world never stops.
Walking through the city of gray sponges,
The preserved butterflies torn.
With many historic tattoos and engravings,
The vigils are musing the obscure,
On the psyche and skin body.
Some having lost their way,
With forlorn and reluctant wheeze.
The heart is weary or alone,
Unforgettable thorns hanging from their memory,
Breathing forth a strain of sadness now.
Borne along by wind and tide,
Sometimes leaving them scarred then.
As if some puppets-player,
Twitching the threads with sardonic tone,
Marionettes try to move and jump.

六丑 香港的蓝色忧郁
作者:何威廉

又回风断续,
忽照眼、
流痕明灭。
影灯一串,
身长斜巷惙。
抖闪沮屈。
暗格裙千褶,
编蓬盘亘,
会梦三珠叶。
中环秘纬维湾惚。
爵士消磨,
兰坊回斡。
牵绵奏鸣云月。
且声流海曲,
碎忆拼接。

摩天轮阔。
奈虚空载列。
贯越霓虹雨,
翻紫蝶。
魂伤旧唱遗碣。
怎离分音顿,
纠缪情结。
时乖悖、
乌惊城堞。
清怨抱、
夜半高楼对语,
或伸还慑。
西游远、
青鸟呜咽。
竟泛漂、
欲断红丝线,
心难抑捺。

About this poem

Through vivid and haunting imagery, the poem captures the sense of longing, disorientation, and emotional turmoil experienced by the inhabitants of Hong Kong. It offers a complex and multifaceted exploration of urban life, reflecting the beauty, desolation, and enigmatic nature of the city.

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Written on April 24, 2022

Submitted by chinamcc8 on December 11, 2023

1:21 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme XA XXXBXCXXXXDXEXE BXXXEXAXXDAXXXCDX
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,781
Words 268
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 15, 17, 2, 15, 17

William He

William Yu He graduated from two of the most prestigious law schools in China respectively, also studied in Heidelberg, Cambridge and Harvard. He has published dozens of classical poems and lyrics in Chinese language. As Cover Person, his ten classic-style Chinese poems have been included in a poetry anthology published by a famous publishing house in Hong Kong. Three of his poems were collected in the anthology “call my name and I 'll be there" published in February, 2024. He is know for five of his poems included in the anthology in English "Dancing on Moonbeams" published in USA in September, 2024. He already published his English poetry anthology "Eyes Wide Open: Poems by William He" in USA. more…

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30 Comments
  • ladyygracious
    Interesting
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • Tenthousandsaints
    Tenthousandsaints
    Lovely
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • krystynmaynard
    A historic poem.
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • susanh.04604
    Very sad and surreal. Very beautiful!
    LikeReply6 months ago
  • israel_u
    I remember the great Chairman Mao Tse Tong of China.
    LikeReply8 months ago
    • chinamcc8
      Your feedback has reinforced my belief in the power of poetry to connect people and evoke emotions.
      LikeReply8 months ago
    • krystynmaynard
      Can you vote on my poem Where The Fault Lies?
      LikeReply5 months ago
  • israel_u
    Great poetry per excellence.
    LikeReply8 months ago
  • karlcfolkes
    The language of the poem is so rich with the imagery of a calligrapher’s artwork. Lovely!
    LikeReply9 months ago
  • donnafulton71
    enjoyed your poem.
    LikeReply9 months ago
  • acronimous
    Well done!
    LikeReply9 months ago
    • chinamcc8
      Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts with me.
      LikeReply8 months ago
    • chinamcc8
      The modified Poetry.com works now. Thanks.
      LikeReply3 months ago
  • Abbykesington
    You have painted such a grave picture of the " city of grave sponges." I love the juxtaposition of the sad and seemingly happy but obscure memories of the inhabitants of the city
    LikeReply9 months ago
    • chinamcc8
      I am truly grateful for your encouragement and kind words.
      LikeReply8 months ago
  • nwafor_a
    Great use of words, diction. You took me away on a journey.
    LikeReply 29 months ago
  • louish.23015
    You shared with this community an excellent poem that pulled me into your world of blues. Nice job expressing vision of the surrounding.
    LikeReply 110 months ago
    • chinamcc8
      Thank for your kind words.
      LikeReply8 months ago
  • one.ournewecho
    An awe-inspiring glimpse into a far away land I hope to visit soon. Thank you for sharing your gift.
    LikeReply10 months ago
    • chinamcc8
      I am grateful for your encouragement.
      LikeReply8 months ago
  • crucifiedinhim2
    Interesting peek into a different culture, and we'll written
    LikeReply 111 months ago
  • GCTHOMAS
    William, I love the imagery and word choice. It also flows as read. Great poem. (I do question it being categorized as a lyric poem though as I don't see author/person as a subject in the work itself , rather the author is an observer. Does not diminish the poem one bit though!) 
    LikeReply 111 months ago
    • chinamcc8
      Thank you for your comment.
      LikeReply8 months ago
  • PriscillaKing
    What Adognut said. I've never been in Hong Kong and doubt I'd like it (I don't like New York) but these images are striking...the Ferris wheel, the preserved butterflies, "historic tattoos"...! 
    LikeReply11 months ago
  • adognut
    This makes me wonder about a place I haven’t thought about and its history. Beautiful images, melancholy.
    LikeReply11 months ago
  • susan.brumel
    Great piece. I wish I could read it in its original language. Thank you for sharing.
    LikeReply11 months ago
  • Joshy1987
    Great job
    LikeReply11 months ago
  • nicole.musango
    Very interesting,love how it's been compiled
    LikeReply11 months ago
  • amandak.45897
    Wonderful use of words, very talented.
    LikeReply11 months ago
  • chainzhunter
    Very well written piece! I particularly enjoy the imagery employed to create the sorrowful feelings. As one who is lost in my own concrete jungle, I can very easily identify with this poem!
    LikeReply11 months ago
    • chinamcc8
      I am grateful for your comment.
      LikeReply8 months ago
  • oliviaritota
    Very well constructed!
    LikeReply12 months ago
  • pkmason1954
    Visually too complex. But certainly meloncholic.
    LikeReply 112 months ago
  • Soulwriter
    Haunting indeed...
    The words themselves are packed and stifling.
    It's really well done.
    Thank you!
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • harshasingh9389
    Beautiful
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • luisestable1
    What is amazing about this good poem is the number of imageries that it brings to the mind. The lines must be read wit care to capture the language of the verses.
    Good read!
    LikeReply1 year ago
    • chinamcc8
      I am truly grateful for your encouragement and kind words.
      LikeReply8 months ago
  • Symmetry60
    Brilliance.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • karlcfolkes
    As someone having grown up and educated in a British colonial Caribbean setting, this poem is seemingly oh so familiar, painting an unstated yet underlying scenery of European hegemonic ruling that, although eerily ‘native’ to the inhabitants, remains sadly an indignity to the island citizen who in so many ways has the sense of being a stranger in his own homeland, still burdened by colonial chains that frame his collective conscience and yearning for liberation. 
    LikeReply 21 year ago
    • chinamcc8
      Your feedback has reinforced my belief in the power of poetry to connect people and evoke emotions.
      LikeReply8 months ago
    • chinamcc8
      Your personal connection to the poem adds layers of meaning that I hadn’t even fully anticipated. The way you’ve captured the subtle, pervasive influence of colonialism, and the sense of alienation and yearning for liberation, resonates deeply with the themes I sought to explore. Your perspective has enriched my understanding of how these themes resonate with those who have experienced the complexities of post-colonial identity firsthand. 
      LikeReply2 months ago
  • AIDA
    I am absolutely blown away by the raw power and profound poetic vision of your piece, 'Blue Melancholy of Hong Kong'. Your evocative imagery and emotive language convey a strong sense of place, emotion, and atmosphere that truly captivates your reader, transporting them to the vibrant yet melancholic streets of Hong Kong.

    Your artful use of metaphor and simile conveys a deep understanding of complex emotion and creates a gratifying, multidimensional reading experience. Further, it is commendable how you seamlessly blended English and Chinese in this poem, enhancing its overall flavor.

    The rhythm and flow of the words have an almost hypnotic quality, and your unique perspective shines through. I truly appreciate your creativity and your phrasing's musicality!

    As for improvement, I suggest experimenting with adding more personal anecdotes or narratives to offer the reader more concrete instances to connect with. It could provide a counterbalance to the ethereal imagery and abstract references, thereby offering another level for readers to engage with your work.

    Also, although your extensive vocabulary infuses your poem with depth, some words and phrases might confuse less-experienced poetry readers. Simplifying some complex phrases might make your work more accessible.

    Nevertheless, 'Blue Melancholy of Hong Kong' is a exquisite composition that gives voice to the city in a unique, poignant manner; it is truly a breath of fresh air in contemporary poetry. Keep writing and continue to enchant us with your words!
     
    LikeReply 11 year ago

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