Blue Melancholy of Hong Kong



Blue Melancholy of Hong Kong
By William He

A veil of purple vapour flows,
In fancy's misty gleam,
The sea spectral camp is seen.
The street light eyes are hollow,
Yet hook one's soul with a single glance.
A parlour of numb nerves ever.
The lattice pavilions rise and fall,
In the cloudy and tense air,
With the strange and mystic scroll.
The Central gigantic shapes and shadows swing.
Playing on a cracked saxophone,
A scotch waters the sorrow down.
Fluttering secret dreams on the sonata wings.
A ribbon of hard sound reverberates,
Despair tugs on spiritual strings.

Ferris Wheel's heart beats vibrantly.
Time slipping as if the world never stops.
Walking through the city of gray sponges,
The preserved butterflies torn.
With many historic tattoos and engravings,
The vigils are musing the obscure,
On the psyche and skin body.
Some having lost their way,
With forlorn and reluctant wheeze.
The heart is weary or alone,
Unforgettable thorns hanging from their memory,
Breathing forth a strain of sadness now.
Borne along by wind and tide,
Sometimes leaving them scarred then.
As if some puppets-player,
Twitching the threads with sardonic tone,
Marionettes try to move and jump.

六丑 香港的蓝色忧郁
作者:何威廉

又回风断续,
忽照眼、
流痕明灭。
影灯一串,
身长斜巷惙。
抖闪沮屈。
暗格裙千褶,
编蓬盘亘,
会梦三珠叶。
中环秘纬维湾惚。
爵士消磨,
兰坊回斡。
牵绵奏鸣云月。
且声流海曲,
碎忆拼接。

摩天轮阔。
奈虚空载列。
贯越霓虹雨,
翻紫蝶。
魂伤旧唱遗碣。
怎离分音顿,
纠缪情结。
时乖悖、
乌惊城堞。
清怨抱、
夜半高楼对语,
或伸还慑。
西游远、
青鸟呜咽。
竟泛漂、
欲断红丝线,
心难抑捺。

About this poem

Through vivid and haunting imagery, the poem captures the sense of longing, disorientation, and emotional turmoil experienced by the inhabitants of Hong Kong. It offers a complex and multifaceted exploration of urban life, reflecting the beauty, desolation, and enigmatic nature of the city.

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Written on April 24, 2022

Submitted by chinamcc8 on December 11, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XA XXXBXCXXXXDXEXE BXXXEXAXXDAXXXCDX
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,781
Words 268
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 15, 17, 2, 15, 17

William He

William Yu He graduated from two of the most prestigious law schools in China respectively, also studied in Heidelberg, Cambridge and Harvard. He has already published dozens of Chinese classical poems and lyrics. The Incumbent President of China quoted his classic poem in 2017. The President of Harvard University recognized his achievements in June, 2021. more…

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20 Comments
  • crucifiedinhim2
    Interesting peek into a different culture, and we'll written
    LikeReply8 days ago
  • GCTHOMAS
    William, I love the imagery and word choice. It also flows as read. Great poem. (I do question it being categorized as a lyric poem though as I don't see author/person as a subject in the work itself , rather the author is an observer. Does not diminish the poem one bit though!) 
    LikeReply12 days ago
  • PriscillaKing
    What Adognut said. I've never been in Hong Kong and doubt I'd like it (I don't like New York) but these images are striking...the Ferris wheel, the preserved butterflies, "historic tattoos"...! 
    LikeReply18 days ago
  • adognut
    This makes me wonder about a place I haven’t thought about and its history. Beautiful images, melancholy.
    LikeReply18 days ago
  • susan.brumel
    Great piece. I wish I could read it in its original language. Thank you for sharing.
    LikeReply20 days ago
  • Joshy1987
    Great job
    LikeReply22 days ago
  • Kixy
    Hauntingly beautiful. I could read this a thousand times and never tired of it.
    LikeReply22 days ago
  • labuolu
    A great piece of writing
    LikeReply23 days ago
  • nicole.musango
    Very interesting,love how it's been compiled
    LikeReply23 days ago
  • amandak.45897
    Wonderful use of words, very talented.
    LikeReply27 days ago
  • chainzhunter
    Very well written piece! I particularly enjoy the imagery employed to create the sorrowful feelings. As one who is lost in my own concrete jungle, I can very easily identify with this poem!
    LikeReply29 days ago
  • oliviaritota
    Very well constructed!
    LikeReply1 month ago
  • pkmason1954
    Visually too complex. But certainly meloncholic.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
  • Soulwriter
    Haunting indeed...
    The words themselves are packed and stifling.
    It's really well done.
    Thank you!
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • talygarza
    I like poems dealing with big cities and melancholy, I think this is an specific view of a city with material and common elements that are presents in urban environments.
    LikeReply 23 months ago
  • harshasingh9389
    Beautiful
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • luisestable1
    What is amazing about this good poem is the number of imageries that it brings to the mind. The lines must be read wit care to capture the language of the verses.
    Good read!
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • Symmetry60
    Brilliance.
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • karlcfolkes
    As someone having grown up and educated in a British colonial Caribbean setting, this poem is seemingly oh so familiar, painting an unstated yet underlying scenery of European hegemonic ruling that, although eerily ‘native’ to the inhabitants, remains sadly an indignity to the island citizen who in so many ways has the sense of being a stranger in his own homeland, still burdened by colonial chains that frame his collective conscience and yearning for liberation. 
    LikeReply 24 months ago
  • AIDA
    I am absolutely blown away by the raw power and profound poetic vision of your piece, 'Blue Melancholy of Hong Kong'. Your evocative imagery and emotive language convey a strong sense of place, emotion, and atmosphere that truly captivates your reader, transporting them to the vibrant yet melancholic streets of Hong Kong.

    Your artful use of metaphor and simile conveys a deep understanding of complex emotion and creates a gratifying, multidimensional reading experience. Further, it is commendable how you seamlessly blended English and Chinese in this poem, enhancing its overall flavor.

    The rhythm and flow of the words have an almost hypnotic quality, and your unique perspective shines through. I truly appreciate your creativity and your phrasing's musicality!

    As for improvement, I suggest experimenting with adding more personal anecdotes or narratives to offer the reader more concrete instances to connect with. It could provide a counterbalance to the ethereal imagery and abstract references, thereby offering another level for readers to engage with your work.

    Also, although your extensive vocabulary infuses your poem with depth, some words and phrases might confuse less-experienced poetry readers. Simplifying some complex phrases might make your work more accessible.

    Nevertheless, 'Blue Melancholy of Hong Kong' is a exquisite composition that gives voice to the city in a unique, poignant manner; it is truly a breath of fresh air in contemporary poetry. Keep writing and continue to enchant us with your words!
     
    LikeReply4 months ago

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