Dougla$Irishman's comments Page #10

A lively poem about eventually meeting our Maker and hearing His salutation,
"Welcome good and faithful servant"!

They say that man is no island but pain is the great equalizer, common to all, When you pray for release and nothing is the answer, just have a stiff upper lip and suffer !

Is this a funny poem to tickle our fancy ? If you don't want to lose a ring never take it off !I have had a wedding ring on my finger for 65 years, how's that for a keeper ? The moral is don't over eat in life to keep your ring looking good ! more »

Posting such junk is as bad as writing it ! Does your life have a code of ethnics ?
Whatever is good and wholesome and uplifting, dwell on these things will make your life meaningful !
Have courage and do what is right ! more »

Promoting this lifestyle is wrong, God created Adam and Eve not Adam and Steve ! The evil of this world is a warning to others, Stay true to God and prosper ! Be a Satan follower and you WILL reap the sorrows 1 more »

A very startling poem about death !
He is the grim reaper always hoping to declare his own.
Heaven and Hell are the two choices, it's up to you , which one ?
Imagine, we get to choose !

Thinking more highly of one's self is deceiving, hoping for the praises of others will only give you a big ego ! Poets are the worse ones !
Be humble and expect nothing in return - who can do it ?

The final and great test in life whether you believe in God or not is your physical pain at the end of life !
When your body is crumbling and no relief is possible
You yearn for a release !
Pain the last frontier to conquer ! more »

This is a very poignant poem about having the Lord in your life !
Having the fellowship and promises in life from the Lord gives us strength.
A very present help in times of need.
Isaiah 46:4 says it all for me ! more »

Thankyou for your nice comment !
That was my very first poem written on June , 2021, it came out of nowhere, what a pleasant surprise !

Ah, a spelling mistake, the world takes notice !I am sure everyone would smile at this mistake ! Smile and the world smiles with you. Weep and you weep alone !

Lisa, putting our thoughts in poetry is really something, we all have something to say like "Hit the Dirt" ! ( From dust to dust ) Right now I am ready to hit the dirt (88 )

Hey, this forum is for poems, not for your silly business !

A very neat poem about maturing in the Lord !
But at 54, you still have a long ways to go and grow !
The real physical test of life is when you are old like me at 88,
I am still growing spiritually, the deep things of God are wonderous
But the aching body is more than I can take !
Poem on about our daily walk with the Lord ! more »

A knight in shinning armor, with a lance in hand, saving the day for his lady in waiting ! What a great adventure poem !

This poem speaks about anger towards each other !
The role of the family is important, as the man is head of the family with the mother being the helpmate she is meant to be !
Not a servant but doing her part in creating a family atmosphere of love, and concern for all.
Mutual respect is a must, dad, mom, son and daughter all doing their part.
It takes hard work to bring it about, but the dividends are priceless !
Ever hear the song - True Love ? Check it out ! more »

This epic poem about love between a guy and a gal is what it is all about !
Love when nurtured is forever lasting - till death do us part !

In the beginning, God created Adam and Eve, not Adam and Steve ! Family values must be maintained.to make it work.

The chain of life, what an amazing poem ! This imagination is so very real, that noble duck is safe yet for another day thanks to his cricket friend !
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Who knows you might become the best of nature poets ! more »

what a delightful poem about young love !
We can all relate to this when our moment came !
Giving her the ring to seal our love to each other !
A special moment is etched in history forever.

An excellent poem about God taking up residence in our lives !
He is our mentor and has a great design for our lives.
The last frontier is when our health declines and we are eager to be with Him !

If life is precious, why kill it ?
Give it up for adoption for caring people !
The world has made it a killing field.
Is there such a thing as marriage anymore ?
To have commitment as your goal !

This is an excellent poem about who we are in creative endeavors. ! To create is part of our makeup. To paint, craft, garden, poetry, music, needle point, book reading, etc. .
One thing we lack is our response to people who write good poetry like this one, wake up people and say something, it's later than you think !
Don't be a pathetic poet, praise a little, we all have egos !
Et Tu Brutus ! more »

What a lovely poem about true love ! To have lived a life like that makes it all worthwhile. Life's memories like this is what it is all about !
Thankyou again, it tugged on my heart !

It doesn't get any better or clearer than this !
God the Father, God the Son and God the Holy Spirit, 3 in 1 !
It has been my greatest gain in life is to know Jesus Christ as my personal savior !
As the years go by, my body is broken but my yearning to know God increases ! more »