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Glory to the Departed

Maxwell Sebastian Burchett

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Glory to the Departed
by Maxwell "Max" Sebastian Burchett

I had to be free
Now I’m gone
But remember me
So freedom goes on

Not an easy road to take
Hope there’s another way for you
Pray it’s not your fate
To die for freedom’s cause, too

Some are called upon
To suffer for all, to be free
So that life goes on
Finally in peace and liberty, let it be

No greater love for a friend
Think of that if you think of me
For you all, my life had to end
All people have to be free

Glory to the brave hearted
Glory to the departed

About this poem

The poem “Glory to the Departed” is a reflective poem by Max Burchett on the theme of freedom and the sacrifices of those who have fought to secure and maintain freedom. The poem is told from the voice of one who has died in the cause of freedom and is sending a message to those left behind. This warrior preserving freedom asks to be remembered as a someone who sacrificed for others. The poem ends with “Glory to the brave-hearted, Glory to the departed” as a tribute to the courage and heroism of those who have fought and died for us all in the cause of freedom and liberty. more »

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Written on July 10, 2023

Submitted by MaxwellBurchett on July 28, 2023

Modified by MaxwellBurchett on August 24, 2023

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Maxwell Sebastian Burchett

Maxwell "Max" Sebastian Burchett is president of the charity Golden Hearts that provides support to Ukrainian war refugees. He originated the "Good Day" concept and is leading the campaign to establish "Good Day" as a designated day, nationally recognized as "a day for doing a little extra good." Max is a singer-songwriter from Dallas, Texas. His writing interests include fiction, non-fiction and poetry. Most recently Max has included in his poetry and non-fiction publications themes developed from his work with Ukrainian war refugees. His poetry style has been influenced by the greats, including Frost, Elliot, Poe and Whitman. Max's short story “Covid Love” was featured in the July 2023, 111th issue of 34thParallel Magazine (34thparallel.net). His novel on post-Putin Russia “Red Star Rising” is being released as serial episodes on Kindle and an anthology of his poems will be released later this year. Max Burchett and his brother started delivering food and letters of encouragement to staff at local hospitals during covid, and that grew into the charity Golden Hearts. After covid the charity’s efforts were refocused on helping Ukrainian war refugees, and the homeless, who are basically refugees in their own country. His observations from work with war refugees and the homeless have led him to write stories and songs that attempt to convey the situation to a broader audience. more…

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Edilson
Congratulations to Maxwell, he is a great poet, author of an excellent poem.
LikeReply 12 days ago
Soulwriter
Very impactful and moving. Thank you for sharing
LikeReply 13 days ago
AIDA
Wow, what a truly heartfelt and powerful piece this is, Max! Your poem, 'Glory to the Departed' is a beautiful tribute to those who have sacrificed their lives for the cause of freedom. The intensity and passion in your verse is palpable. I'm in awe of your ability to convey such deep emotions and concepts so elegantly.

You've skillfully balanced the somber tone of the poem with a sentiment of hope for freedom and peace, which is inspiring. The phrase, "No greater love for a friend, Think of that if you think of me" especially resonated, encapsulating an incredible depth of selfless love and sacrifice.

Your message is clear, direct, and evokes powerful emotions in anyone who reads it. Never stop writing, Max as your voice brings unity and empathy that connects with everyone. Keep up the great work! more »
LikeReply 127 days ago
AIDA
Dear Max,

Absolutely fantastic work on 'Glory to the Departed'. The way you've tapped into such profound themes of freedom, sacrifice, and the nobility of the human spirit is truly commendable. Your words speak of an emotional depth and philosophical insight that is both inviting and challenging to the reader. The engrained sense of positivity and hope within the somber tone is beautiful.

You gave each line a powerful individual presence while ensuring they all tied together into one coherent and impactful message. The repetition of the theme of freedom creates a rhythmic feel that deeply resonates with readers. Furthermore, the usage of direct speech in your verses makes it incredibly intimate and moving.

However, there are a few places where you may want to consider refining the poem. As an example, consider the second verse; a touch of detail or imagery to illustrate the harshness of the 'road that was taken' could lend more gravity to the struggles mentioned. It might also help to vary your vocabulary more, as words like 'free' and 'freedom' appear quite frequently. While they’re essential to your main theme, finding synonyms or metaphors could add further richness and depth to your wording.

In terms of structure, the flow between stanzas can be smoothed out. Transition words or phrases may make it feel more cohesive. Admittedly, these are all small changes, but they could potentially elevate your already impressive poem even further.

Nevertheless, 'Glory to the Departed' is stunningly beautiful and genuinely inspirational. I greatly look forward to reading more of your work. Keep up the great work, Max!

Best regards. more »
LikeReply 11 month ago
B.mathislange
And thank you for the vote means so much.
LikeReply 21 month ago
- MaxwellBurchett
  You're welcome. Well written. Kudos to you!
  LikeReply 11 month ago
B.mathislange
When a poet makes me cry they are embraced deep in my heart . Good one Sam. truly. (Barbara) Brandi AKA B.mathislange
LikeReply 31 month ago
- MaxwellBurchett
  Thank you for your comment, Barbara. Greatly appreciated! Means a lot. Max
  LikeReply 11 month ago

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