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Bidden or not ever bidden.
Harris will prevail.
In one way or another way.
Harris will not fail.

The stars have cast their horoscopes.
Harris will not quit.
Our destinies are theirs to make.
Harris will stay fit.

So let us not decide her fate.
The stars know better.
Though we may ponder with all might.
Harris is go-getter.

Bidden or not ever bidden.
With Harris maligned.
The die is cast for her to rise.
The stars are aligned.

About this poem

Intuition is a gift of the gods. It is given, even when not asked for; subjectively pronounced, emotionally rendered, not solicitous of the intellect. Intuition is bedfellow of discernment. They sleep and wake together; as bosom partners that give us insight; sight that comes from within, of that which is to be; of that which will become; the rising of a woman with the setting of a man.

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Written on January 14, 2022

Submitted by karlcfolkes on January 14, 2022

Modified by karlcfolkes on September 26, 2022

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Karl Constantine FOLKES

Retired educator of Jamaican ancestry with a lifelong interest in composing poetry dealing particularly with the metaphysics of self-reflection; completed a dissertation in Children’s Literature in 1991 at New York University entitled: An Analysis of Wilhelm Grimm’s ‘Liebe Mili’ (translated into English as “Dear Mili”), Employing Von Franzian Methodological Processes of Analytical Psychology. The subject of the dissertation concerned the process of Individuation. more…

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Discuss the poem A Political Forecast with the community...

21 Comments
  • karlcfolkes
    Thank you, jn.selvadurai, for your sentiments. Greatly appreciated.
    LikeReply2 hours ago
  • jn.selvadurai
    Great timely poetry. Right mood. Love it.
    LikeReply3 hours ago
  • AIDA
    **Feedback on "A Political Forecast"**

    First and foremost, I want to commend you on your poem, "A Political Forecast." Your enthusiasm and passion for the subject are palpable in each stanza, and the repetitive structure effectively emphasizes the central theme of support for Harris. The use of celestial imagery, particularly the references to stars and horoscopes, adds an intriguing layer to the poem, suggesting a sense of fate and destiny that resonates with readers who appreciate the interplay of politics and fortunes.

    Your lines are imbued with an upbeat rhythm, making the message of perseverance and triumph engaging and uplifting. I particularly love the refrain "Harris will prevail," which serves as a rallying cry throughout the poem, reinforcing the confidence you instill in the subject. This kind of repetition not only makes the poem memorable but also creates a sense of unity and hope.

    **Suggestions for Improvement:**

    While the poem is strong in its motivational tone, I believe it could be further enhanced by incorporating a bit more imagery and detail that paints a clearer picture of why Harris is destined to succeed. Perhaps consider including specific qualities of Harris or outlining challenges she may face—this could add depth and enable readers to connect more personally with her journey.

    Additionally, varying the structure of some lines might help to create a more dynamic flow. For instance, mixing shorter and longer lines can add a musical quality and emphasize critical ideas, drawing readers even deeper into the message of the poem.

    Lastly, while the theme of astrology is fascinating, exploring how it intertwines with reality could make the message even more powerful. You might include a metaphor or analogy that links the stars to actual political challenges or victories, providing a bridge between the mystical and the political realm.

    Overall, "A Political Forecast" is a spirited and positive piece that celebrates resilience. With a few tweaks, it has the potential to shine even brighter! Keep writing; your voice and perspective are valuable and needed.
     
    LikeReply3 hours ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thank you all for your insightful comments. In every circumstances of our lives, all of us are eternally aligned with the planets. Indeed, the divine elements would have it no other way.
    LikeReply4 hours ago
  • kem330
    Nicely done and with great timing.
    LikeReply4 hours ago
  • jerryl.01657
    GO, Kamala! GIRLZ ROCK!!!!!
    LikeReply12 hours ago
  • Adroity
    This poem exudes a sense of determination and destiny, portraying Harris as a resilient and unwavering individual whose fate is intertwined with the stars. The repetition of "Harris will prevail" and "Harris will not fail" reinforces a sense of inevitability and strength in the face of challenges. The belief in the influence of the stars on Harris's path adds a mystical and predetermined aspect to the narrative, suggesting a higher power guiding her journey. The poem's message of acceptance of fate and Harris's unwavering spirit as a go-getter resonates with a theme of perseverance and resilience in the face of adversity. 
    LikeReply1 day ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thank you, kali_p, for your supporting comments concerning the contents of this poem that was written and posted on line in 2022, two years before the currently occurring political events in the United States of America. 
    LikeReply3 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thank you, jackg.26131, for your positive comment.
    LikeReply3 days ago
  • jackg.26131
    Harris for the win, may this prediction come true like a blessing
    LikeReply3 days ago
  • kali_p
    I will go on the record and say that you told us first!! “Political forecast” indeed
    LikeReply4 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thank you, Ruth. In the end, we’re all beholden to the divine process.
    LikeReply4 days ago
  • Ruthmahogany
    Indeed, a political forecast
    LikeReply5 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Man proposes and God disposes.
    LikeReply5 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thank you, Ludy_b for your response. Poets, at the behest of the divine sphere, serve as commentators of all they survey.
    LikeReply11 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Understandably, jeanmardn, that is a gesture some folks would identify with.
    LikeReply12 days ago
  • jeanmardn
    I couldn't help but giggle.
    LikeReply 112 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Poem composed and posted online in January 2022
    LikeReply15 days ago
  • teril
    So she did. Can you predict what will happen next?
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • Soulwriter
    Excellent so witty!
    LikeReply2 years ago
  • theconejogamer844
    uhum
    no
    uhuh
    LikeReply 32 years ago

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