Dougla$Irishman's comments Page #6

Remember Adam and Eve ? So we are born with a sin nature !
Ask God for His nature, your life will be much better !

Writing poetry will not always make it better !

Kurt, just a little brevity. !
Do not live your life in vain,
Use your ability to help others,
The Golden Rule needs no frame
It's beauty is on the canvas !

Your 4 liner demands my attention !

We all need the touch of a child, for they are not tainted yet with this world !
A delightful poem about the little things that can make us happy and content !
Children have a world of their own, let's learn and enjoy from them. more »

That is a very profound poem about how we live our lives on a daily basis !
Certainly most of us live too ordinary, nothing much there to make a difference What's the answer ? Trust God and learn of Him, your life will count then !
I have never seen a Christian say he was sorry he become one ! more »

What a novel soul who wants to hit the dirt !
Lisa Campbell wrote a poem you would like very much
Called "Hitting the Dirt ", it is especially for guys like you !
Look it up !

What a great poem about everyday life with it's meaning !
Living the life like this guy will create everlasting memories when you are old !
But remember in the Bible,
John 3 : 3 - 7 dying to self !
Just make sure you kiss her and say I love you everyday !
Better still give her a nice pin and kerchief ! more »

This poem describes what a sick sex world we live in
This poem is meant for the trash can where all garbage belongs !

A wonderful poem about growing in Christ.
I was a babe at 22 years old, now 88 and it gets sweeter as time goes on !
I have never doubted His Saving Grace, am nearing that pearly gate !

Thanks for the encouragement. more »

An eye opening poem about being an active follower of God !
This is the gist of all Christianity, that we are in the Lord's service if you love Him.
2 Tim 2: 15 - Study to show you are a workman not ashamed of what you are learning and tell the Good News to others
Are you a lowly footman soldier in God's Salvation army ? more »

Know you not that they which run in a race, run all, but only one receives the prize ?
So run as if you would win the prize !
1 Cor:: :24 - 27

This poem describes there is more to life than wrinkles and grey hairs and that experience is the best teacher
If at first you don't succeed, try and try again !

Mark, this is an incredible story about Peter and his Lord Jesus Christ.
Thankyou for the great narrative theme of the washing of feet.
The wonders of the Bible is like no other !

Man made religions will get you no where.
It is only through the saving knowledge of Jesus Christ that life has it's true meaning !
John 3 : 16 for starters

This new poetry now a days , sometimes is an endless amount of words, that's
goes nowhere.
Make it rhyme or a free verse that leaves an impact to others !
I am a new writer but I see the difference !
Look up some of the master poets, like Frost or Kilmer more »

Us humans must learn the art of protecting our land !
You can't control the forces of nature but we can do our part.

Cleaning the forests of debris is a must.
look at California !

My wife, Bette and me often when we were young and foolish
Would walk in the rain hand in hand and getting soaking wet !
Soaking hair. clothes and all, we loved it, it's young love and you only get one chance ! more »

Excellent thoughts here ! My reply
We are just a passing through
This is not our home
But our citizenship is in Heaven
And from it we await a Savior !
Phil 3 : 20

Suffering is part and parcel of life and you do the best you can to cope with it.
The test of a lifetime is when you are very old .and no help is available.
Ever hear of MAID ? Many have used it ! Pain the last frontier to conquer ! more »

A very good poem about the end times Are we closer than ever before ?
This wicked world deserves no second chance, Come Lord Jesus, your servants need to go !

The one word you lack to be a master painter or poet is
INSPIRATION, without it your canvas is empty to the pleasing eye
The poet must be in unison with his pen !

Whatever you sow, you will reap
Decisions are made, we hope for the best
In God we trust
Just look at the USA penny !

Yes now is the time to turn your lives over to God
Even if you lived by the 10 commandments, your life would take a U turn. !
A self made man is just that, still made of what he thinks only !
You will never make it on your own, make Jesus Christ your mentor ! more »

At 15 years old you are still wet behind the ears !
You still have a lot of living to do in the levels of love.
Be easy, not serious, read a book, get in sports, be kind and gentle, have many friends share good things, make your life count !
Girls friends are nice but not yet !
There is plenty of time for that ! more »

Amen to this excellent poem about a believer 's yearning to be with His Lord.
One day the things of this world will grow strangely dim and then the brightness of Jesus will claim His own !

An interesting poem about who we are with our emotions !
When you are young at heart we usually can cope
But as you age the battle lines are drawn
And you will win some and lose some !