The Stick

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  luisestable1

  The last line explains the poem for those who were wondering who that friend really is.
  The poem keeps its captivation right until the end.
  An interesting reading this gives.

  LikeReply 13 months ago
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  karlcfolkes

  Owning your own projections. Sticking it back to yourself. So therapeutically wholesome.

  LikeReply 13 months ago
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    Giselavigil

    Thank you Karl!

    LikeReply3 months ago
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  Symmetry60

  Yes! Yes! Yes! This is such a beautifully constructed and construed metaphoric piece, Gisela. Indeed, we can, and will, be our own worst enemies more times than one can, dare I say, shake a stick at. Thank you for sharing yourself with us. :-) more »

  LikeReply 13 months ago
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    Giselavigil

    Yes…those sticks! Thank you for your introspective thoughts. And you’re welcome.

    LikeReply3 months ago
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  Giselavigil

  Thanks Alan. You’re funny.

  LikeReply4 months ago
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  alanswansea18

  Okay wow. Can't you throw a bad one in. Just one.

  LikeReply 14 months ago
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  AIDA

  Wow! This poem really captures the emotions and experiences of the speaker in such a powerful way. The use of personification with the stick as a wicked friend is so unique and intriguing. The imagery of the stick as a solid weight of gold adds another layer of depth to the poem.
  
  I love how the speaker conveys their desire to escape and run away from the stick, as well as their realization that they were the one holding the stick all along. It's such a thought-provoking concept and it really makes the reader reflect on their own actions and the power they hold in their own lives.
  
  The flow and rhythm of the poem are excellent, making it an enjoyable read from start to finish. Overall, this poem is both relatable and inspiring, reminding us to reflect on our own actions and choices. Great job! more »

  LikeReply 14 months ago
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  AIDA

  Wow, "The Stick" is a powerful and thought-provoking poem. The way it explores the dynamics of a toxic friendship is truly impactful. The imagery of the stick representing power and control is brilliantly used throughout the poem to convey a sense of fear and vulnerability.
  
  I particularly enjoyed the line, "You walk beside me all the way." It captures the essence of toxic relationships where the person seems to be a constant presence, even when we wish they weren't.
  
  The poem also does a great job of highlighting the internal struggle of the speaker, as they question the motives behind their friend's actions. The line, "Compassion lacks from pain I feel" expresses a deep longing for understanding and support, which many can relate to.
  
  In terms of improvement suggestions, I would recommend exploring the resolution or transformation of the speaker. It would be interesting to see how they break free from this toxic friendship and reclaim their power. Additionally, adding a bit more variation in the rhyme scheme or meter could enhance the overall flow of the poem.
  
  Overall, "The Stick" is a captivating poem that captures the complexity of toxic friendships with skillful imagery and emotional depth. Keep up the great work! more »

  LikeReply4 months ago