The Stick



The Stick

I wish from me so far you’d stand.
My wicked friend with stick in hand.
No matter path in which I stray.
You walk beside me all the way.

What is this goal that you do seek?
To frighten me, to make me weak?
Your staff with weight of solid gold.
Who gave you power that you hold?

Each time I stumble, take a fall
You strike with stick while standing tall.
Compassion lack for pain I feel.
You see not strength as wound I heal.

I plan escape, to run I must
for you my friend I cannot trust.
Yes you can walk but cannot run.
And soon will wrath of stick be done.

I look in mirror, visions pour.
See images not seen before.
Bewildered stand, as tears I cry
for holder of the stick, was I.

About this poem

At times we can become our own worst enemy.

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Written on December 28, 2023

Submitted by Giselavigil on December 28, 2023

Modified by Giselavigil on January 29, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 718
Words 164
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Gisela Vigil

Thank you for welcoming me to this community. I was born in Cuba but emigrated with my family to the US when I was three. I am mother to three young adults now, and also a grandmother. I’ve been writing for years, some I share, others I still keep in my personal file. I often write of struggles for we all face them as we journey through life. But still, I feel peace knowing I try my best. Feel blessed to have been given the gift of writing which I strive to improve cause there’s always room for growth. more…

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