The Blade



You’d think after years in the making,
the fury would somehow then fade.
But anger’s a potent emotion
that cuts like a double-edge blade.

You’ve tried grasping it with precision,
so as you hold on you won’t bleed.
No matter the tactic you’re using,
Internal is damage you feed.

Unwillingly, you become owner
of wrath you no longer can tame.
The bitterness felt for another
is self-injury now that you claim.

It’s wise not to hang on to fury.
Its shadow will never quite fade.
For anger’s a potent emotion
that cuts like a double-edge blade.
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Written on 2010

Submitted by Giselavigil on January 09, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme abcB cdad efef xbcB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 568
Words 111
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Gisela Vigil

Thank you for welcoming me to this community. I was born in Cuba but emigrated with my family to the US when I was three. I am mother to three young adults now, and also a grandmother. I’ve been writing for years, some I share, others I still keep in my personal file. I often write of struggles for we all face them as we journey through life. But still, I feel peace knowing I try my best. Feel blessed to have been given the gift of writing which I strive to improve cause there’s always room for growth. more…

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  • alanswansea18
    This one I love it has a special meaning to me. And was meant to be. For me to see.
    LikeReply 13 months ago
    • Giselavigil
      Thanks! I’m happy it did.
      LikeReply3 months ago
    • alanswansea18
      okay Gisela. I have a dentist appointment today can you help me out with that? I had so many needles and IVs in my lifetime I'm kind of scared I'm going to get another needle today. Can you hold my hand? Just kidding. 
      LikeReply3 months ago

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