Words not Thought, but Felt



As a retired teacher
I think back to the many times
I was asked why I write poetry
but don’t teach it.
My response,
“I don’t know how to”.
Truth is, I tried
but didn’t get very far.

If I could go back and reteach
I believe I’d do a better job.
I’d ask students to just write
without rhythm or rhyme,
any thoughts they were thinking.
Then I’d ask them to reread,
crossing out extra words
or phrases that didn’t say much,
while highlighting those
that stood out
by making them feel something.
They’d add comma for a pause,
explore synonyms,
and when they’d hit a nerve
I would ask them to dig deeper.

I imagine, I see their faces.
Eyes springing open
while a breathe is held,
as poem leaps out from page.
A mirrored image,
not of the mind, but of the heart.
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Written on January 08, 2024

Submitted by Giselavigil on January 08, 2024

Modified by Giselavigil on January 08, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXXXXXX CXXXDXXCXXDXBXA XXXXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 800
Words 172
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 15, 6

Gisela Vigil

Thank you for welcoming me to this community. I was born in Cuba but emigrated with my family to the US when I was three. I am mother to three young adults now, and also a grandmother. I’ve been writing for years, some I share, others I still keep in my personal file. I often write of struggles for we all face them as we journey through life. But still, I feel peace knowing I try my best. Feel blessed to have been given the gift of writing which I strive to improve cause there’s always room for growth. more…

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