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  January 2023     2 hours ago

Submitted Poems 18 total

In Your Garden”

“In Your Garden”

I planted my heart in your garden
and looked on as young leaves grew
At their bend and by their pardon,
fragrant flowers blossomed too

My tree stands tall; her roots lie deep
her graceful body knowing
Your fertile...

by Susan Mayer Brumel

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Lullaby of Many Moons”

“Lullaby of Many Moons”

One night I walked the foggy wood,
beneath a five moon cluster;
Observing it through leafy hood,
enchanted by its golden luster

Sleepy thicket, quiet and still
but for the tree frogs on the boughs;
The air was...

by Susan Mayer Brumel

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Look See

“Look, See”

Look
into
each
other’s
eyes


  See

  your reflection

Earth,
peace

Humanity,
...

by Susan Mayer Brumel

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Nature of War

“Nature of War”

I kindled my Sabbath candles,
as sun set behind the wood
Peace of golden respite shattered,
as only death screams could

Perhaps a fox, or gentle fawn
was ambushed by coyote-
Her desperate cries in darkness,
sent terror...

by Susan Mayer Brumel

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Cheek of Child

“Cheek of Child”

War cuts deep into cheek of child
Winged young warrior, flesh of peace
A heinous death unreconciled

An angel slain as Satan smiled
The irony will never cease
War cuts deep into cheek of child

Uplifted to the heavens...

by Susan Mayer Brumel

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Beautifully written. Resonates with those experiencing depression as well as people who care about them. Very descriptive metaphor.

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It tells a lovely story of the Irish spirit, with a lilting cadence and nice rhyme. The descriptions of the culture and countryside are very enjoyable to read. Well done!

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That balance is not easy to find.
Enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.

4 days ago

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also, and should have been first- Thank you!

4 days ago

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you’re funny

4 days ago

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I had trouble the first time I submitted but it was fine afterwards. I hope you have the same experience!

8 days ago

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First three stanzas, but I thought it was done very well.

8 days ago

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Thank you so much.

9 days ago

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Sounds like you had a nice holiday too. Hope you’ve regained consciousness!

13 days ago

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Thank you. Hope you had a nice day too.

14 days ago

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Thanks, I’ll try again

17 days ago

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Thank you so much.
How do I fix the title?

17 days ago

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I posted one I wrote last year for all the little ones . Never posted like that before. Not sure if it even gets seen

18 days ago

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Thanks!

23 days ago

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Thank you so much, Charlotte!

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