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Just an amateur poet trying to get some constructive feedback on my work. Feel free to be brutally honest LOL. Enjoy!

  March 2024     23 days ago

Submitted Poems 5 total

Boulders Aren't Forever

Boulders Aren't Forever

Such a beautiful soul;
A treasure called home before fully collected.
Never a cross word exchanged unnecessarily.
Days pass and the feels drop in like skateboarders
Relenting only to the day to day musings;
Another...

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Unmerry Go Round

Welcome to the whirlpool
Where currents swirl
Oblivious to the direction of intent
Whisking us past the things we want to see

Stopping is not an option
The undertow is too great
Incessant waves on a journey
To some focal point no one can...

– by Brad Ackerman

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Celestial Sparkle

Reach for the stars
Even if you can't grab one
If but for a brief moment
To hold the most stunning light ever beheld.

To be able to see
Even in the darkest times
As clearly as if it were day
From a light more radiant than any

A guide,...

– by Brad Ackerman

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Soul at a Glance

You gotta give yourself grace.
Allow the tears to come if they ask to,
To choose you when others refuse to,
To be brave enough to accept the truth

 Even if it hurts you.
Vulnerable enough to let it break you,
Strong enough to realize that...

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Head Guests

Thoughts are like house guests.
Some good; some bad.
Some they leave and close the door,
While others leave the door standing wide open.

Some remember to wipe their feet before entering;
Others track in dirt and grime with them.
The good...

– by Brad Ackerman

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Very well written piece! I particularly enjoy the imagery employed to create the sorrowful feelings. As one who is lost in my own concrete jungle, I can very easily identify with this poem!

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