Kixy
  Bronze Member

Okay, I can't tell if this is genius or terrible. However, I absolutely love it.

You painted a perfect picture of a child. I enjoyed this very much.

A story well told through poetry. I just want to hug the little boy ...

I'll answer. Never and always. Life has balance and without one you cannot have the other. This poem is a fun way to provoke thought, however!

Hauntingly beautiful. I could read this a thousand times and never tired of it.

Honestly I don't understand it nor do I feel it flows well. The ideas seem jumbled.

Even in old age people still feel the need of others approval. I long for the quiet days when I can fill my voids with words and worry not of anything.

This whisks you away to a time period where language flourished.