Abbykesington
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I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Even further encouraged to write more. The eclipse was what inspired the poem, but in reality, the sun, moon and earth were metaphors...

I'm glad you love it. I read some of your poe.s. They are very strong...speaks a lot of courage.

poetic licensing allows for creativity... so do please indulge yourself!

thanks for enjoying the poem. I hope you got to see the deeper meanings embedded in the lines.

" the harvest cannot grow without one to make it sow", are the punch lines for me. I like the rhymes too.

Thank you. I hope you were able to see the deeper meanings between the lines...

I pray you have the courage to move on. You should know you'll never forget her. You'll just be able to live in peace with the memories you shared and the part of you that she'll always live with. more »

"The kind that has you sacrificing yourself in devotion " that truly expressed how smitten you were by her!

"Melancholy melody of mania and madness" are very strong words to express the complexities of human emotion. You make me see how unexplained sadness can feel like a melody that dances between the realms of mania and madness more »

I'm glad they carry such powers. Thanks.

Thank you. Words carry a lot of meanings for me.

I absolutely agree with you. Light always overcomes darkness. No matter how long it takes, light will shine through. Thanks for your comments. I hope you will enjoy reading my other poems.

It reads like a lullaby, especially the 2nd&3rd stanzas. Very good rhme pattern. I love most the lines " Trust the moon to gently rock the daylight from her eyes". Keep writing.

Thanks. Good friends are very hard to come by. Particularly these days.

Easy, fun, light. Good read. Great work