npirandy
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It's nice to see you in the credits again, but I think your rhythm and rhyme bought higher praise than you received.

As a vet myself, I can appreciate the sentiment. This is a very poignant piece. Good job and congratulations.

You busted onto the scene with a 2nd place finish. Good work

Congrats Susanna! You had my vote this month.

Well structured and sentimental.

One of our neighbors had 3 daughters that I pretty much grew up with. The last one of the girls was special needs. When we were older, and the oldest daughter got married. The youngest kept coming to me to dance every time the band played at the reception. It made me feel like a king. more »

Thanks for reading and taking time to comment

That it did indeed.

As far as the skivvies go, I'm the picture of frugality.

I forgot to mention. They can PARTY with the best of 'em!!

I met a gal in Australia while on R & R. They are the sweetest people! They are among the few countries that still love us for who we are rather than what they can get from us.
Sorry for your loss my friend. more »

Well, it worked for me!

Good job Alana! A suiting ode to culture.

Ha!!! Old age my ass! I probably have underwear older than you.

A haunting tale of grief relayed in pure eloquence. Well done!