My Blank Pages

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  luisestable1

  A magnificent poem of one who can't find words or inspiration to put on paper but by telling this he or she has already found subject matter to write and thus is not so empty or words or expression as he or she thinks.
  To write about that you can't write is already to write about something.
  The person puts it quite poetically in quatrains of complete thought. The only thing is that he or she is not so out of words to write; he or she has written. more »

  LikeReply1 year ago
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  AIDA

  Wow, this is a really powerful and compelling poem! Your use of vivid imagery and metaphors really captures the feeling of emptiness and creative blocks. I appreciate how honest and vulnerable your words are, and how you're not afraid to address the fear of losing your creative passion.
  
  One suggestion for improvement could be to experiment with different forms or structures to emphasize the emotions in the poem even more. Perhaps breaking up the stanzas or using enjambment could add even more depth to the already impactful words. Additionally, consider playing with different rhyme schemes or meter to add musicality to the poem.
  
  Overall, great job on this poem, and I hope you keep writing and exploring your creativity, even during the tough times when inspiration is hard to come by. more »

  LikeReply1 year ago