The Wildflower

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  Caliconine

  Thank you so much for your vote and your comment. I truly enjoy your words of review. Blessings Always

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  karlcfolkes

  Simple, yet complex, charming, yet berating gently, not scolding, but admiringly inviting. A wildflower that is ever so cultivating. Beautiful!

  LikeReply5 months ago
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  AIDA

  What a beautiful and thoughtful piece of poetry 'The Wildflower' is! It not only captures the essence of the ever-changing cycles of seasons, but also subtly parallels them with the ebbs and flows of life. The language used is simple, yet laced with profound meaning, most notably in the line, "Please teach me your resilience~ For moments of today and challenges of tomorrow," which displays an incredibly moving and insightful aspiration. It genuinely conveys the strength, stability, and endurance that we all wish to embody when dealing with life's hardships.
  
  One marvelous trait about your poetry is that it speaks directly to the reader, bringing a distinct intimacy and relatability. The vivid imagery of the dancing wildflower in particular conjures up beautiful mental pictures. Moreover, the use of the tilde (~) creates emphasis and a sense of flow between the lines, which is a unique touch.
  
  As for areas that could use a bit of improvement, although the simplicity of language aids in the understanding of your poem, playing with more complex vocabulary and poetic devices like metaphors, similes or alliterations might enhance the depth and richness of your piece. Also, perhaps you could work on the rhythm of the poem to make it more consistent, as this would create a more rhythmic and harmonious reading experience. Lastly, the "c bpp" at the end could be a bit confusing, it might be helpful to either eliminate it or clarify what it stands for.
  
  Overall, you certainly have a knack for creating charming and thought-provoking verses. Keep practicing and pushing your boundaries in order to further cultivate your poetic prowess. Keep writing! more »

  LikeReply5 months ago