The Treefort



In the heart of the forest, where the leaves whisper secrets,
Where squirrels build their homes and birds sing their sonnets,
There stands a magical place, hidden from view,
A place where imagination takes root and dreams come true.

It's called the Treefort, a fortress in the trees,
Where branches become bridges and trunks form walls with ease.
The entrance is a hollow, where fairies guard the gate,
And only those with wonder in their hearts can navigate.

The floors are made of moss, soft and springy underfoot,
And sunlight filters through the leaves, casting patterns that beguile.
The walls are woven from spider silk, strong yet delicate,
And fireflies provide the lanterns, glowing softly in the night.

Each room has its purpose, designed by woodland creatures:
The Owl's Library, filled with ancient scrolls and mystical features;
The Squirrel's Pantry, stocked with acorns and honey;
The Bat's Observatory, where constellations are mapped out so funny.

Upstairs, in the treetop suite, lives the Treefort King,
A wise old owl with a crown made of twigs and feathers.
He oversees the festivities, from moonlit dances to starlight feasts,
And ensures that every creature feels welcome at this magical retreat.

Outside, there's a swing made of vines that reaches for the sky,
And a slide carved from bark that spirals down to where fireflies fly.
The Treefort echoes with laughter, as squirrels chase their tails,
And chipmunks play hide-and-seek behind ancient tree scales.

So if you ever find yourself lost in the woods one day,
Look for the Treefort nestled high among the branches sway.
Climb up its ladder of dreams and step into its embrace,
For there's no place quite like it—a haven of wonder and grace.
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Written on October 16, 2023

Submitted by SiDaStuff on October 16, 2023

1:37 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAA BBCC XXXX DDEE XDXX FFGG HHII
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,727
Words 318
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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16 Comments
  • CarmiPhilander
    A magical and ethereal poem redolent of children's literature.
    LikeReply 13 months ago
  • ravensheart50
    This is beautiful and magical. Your work is wonderful and I love every line.
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • Soulwriter
    Wow a truly enchanting poem. It reminded me of the imagery in the Lord of the Rings books. I look forward to reading more by you Silas. Congratulations!
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • Vixility
    Excellent poem and much deserved win! Deepest congratulations!
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • MaggieRan26
    Congratulations! The Treefort is an enchanting read! Thank you for sharing this wonderful imagery.
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • Philipo
    Educative.
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • adam.gutteridge
    Congratulations Silas! I’m thrilled that such an enchanting poem won the competition. Well deserved!
    LikeReply 25 months ago
    • SiDaStuff
      Thanks! I really enjoy poem writing!
      LikeReply 15 months ago
  • lovingempath
    This is absolutely magical! It reminded me of when I was a child and had an imagination...(before my hormones started shifting around:). Congratulations Silas!
    LikeReply 15 months ago
    • SiDaStuff
      Thanks so Much! I checked out some of your poems, they are really good.
      LikeReply 15 months ago
    • lovingempath
      Thank you Silas.
      LikeReply5 months ago
  • SiDaStuff
    Hello! My name is Silas, and I wrote this poem. If you would like to get a reply to you from me, just reply to this comment!
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • AIDA
    Your poem 'The Treefort' is beautifully written with an enchantingly magical narrative and a vivid description that makes it easy to imagine all the details of this mystical place. The imaginative elements like the fairy-guarded hollow entrance and the firefly lanterns offer added magic that most readers, especially children, will appreciate.

    I absolutely love your creativity in envisaging 'The Treefort', especially the idea of the different rooms owned by various forest creatures. It adds depth and uniqueness to your piece. Your inclusion of animals adds an element of familiarity for younger readers and the 'Treefort King' is a notably fascinating character.

    Your use of beautiful, eloquent language and the rhythm and flow of the poem is impressive. It is as if the poem guides the reader through a whimsical journey, making it truly immersive.

    As for suggestions, while your descriptions are truly splendid, you could benefit from varying your sentence lengths. The poem’s rhythm could be enhanced by including a mix of both long and short sentences. Shorter sentences would add a surprise element to the captivating rhythm you've already established. Also, adding more sensory language alongside your rich visual imagery can make the experience even more engaging for the reader.

    Additionally, the ending of the poem, while beautiful, leaves a longing for a more explicit message or lesson. Perhaps ending with something about the power of imagination or the wonders of nature would give an enriching thematic closure to the poem.

    Nonetheless, 'The Treefort' is a brilliant piece of work that is a pleasure to read, transporting the reader to a fantastical and delightful world. Keep writing and enchanting the readers with your magical tales.
     
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • npirandy
    Mystical and magical, filled with wonderful imagery. Well done indeed!
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • TJK
    Deep thought. Only poem that makes any sense. The rest are just babbling random contractions. Very amature. Should proofread. Lack of proper grammar basics.
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • motto78.mo
    I love the journey on which this takes my imagination. Every tree I lean against will take me here. Just wonderful!
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • ilovewrighting
    This poem painted such a gorgeous picture. I was able to follow all the imagery and create this mental picture of a gigantic, magical, tree house as the narrator described it. I could feel the moss beneath my feet, see the observatory and the study, as it was described, for the owl and the bat. But it's also excellent as a metaphor. Wildlife can find all sorts of homes in trees, so it could also be a great way to describe the way they all coexist in the same ecosystem, as if they all were part of a magical fairy fort within the tree. I kept coming back to this poem once I read it, and couldn't quite get the mossy, gorgeous tree house image out of my head. Well done! 
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • adam.gutteridge
    What a treat to read! A truly magical poem about a place that I’d love to visit! The poem took me to another world. Fantastic!
    LikeReply 15 months ago
  • katherineb.45444
    The rhymes are very well woven together, the poem is creative and it speaks to the reader as well as unlocking some imagination about childhood.
    LikeReply 15 months ago

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