A Kinder Scent Of Coming Spring



When snails shed their shyness
their homeless cousins timid still
Spiders invite themselves in for tea
their gifted lattice weave drapes the old TV

When the fog’s faces don’t illicit fear
Cheeks pressed up against the clear pane
harmless degenerates placing bets on droplets
skiing down the open window slope

When countryside thunder forgets itself
clapping as spectator with no command
Pulling clouds over its head to sleep
drifting away so all may nap

When the monsoon storm refuses to rage
grants permission for its yawns to wander free
The playful young gales swing through the racks
knowing they can’t afford any hanging dresses

Nothing happens in the in-between
Relax those fangs but purse your lips
quietly breathe and willfully surrender
to a kinder scent of coming spring

About this poem

I welcome Winter, for it's when I'm most in my element and comfortable- to the point where Spring often feels foreign to me.

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Submitted by Jewoo525 on September 24, 2023

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Scheme XXAA XXXX XXXX XAXX XXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 799
Words 141
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Je Woo Han

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4 Comments
  • Symmetry60
    I'm glad you're not wasting your gift and instead utilizing it to its fullest. If your mind were any sharper, I'd shave with it. Two thumbs up!
    LikeReply4 months ago
  • Philipo
    Fine work. It stands out.
    LikeReply 16 months ago
    • Jewoo525
      Thank you, friend.
      LikeReply6 months ago
  • Vixility
    Again, Je, you forge a fine work here. I must say, your ability to paint with personification is unmatched! Mind blowing really …

    I agree with David, the line in that third stanza—pulling clouds over its head to sleep—was such an astonishing visual that I spent nearly ten minutes rereading that stanza alone!

    My daughter also reads through these contest poems with me and yours was among the four or five that she really liked.
     
    LikeReply6 months ago
    • Vixility
      Oh yeah. Did you see that our friend is back?
      LikeReply 16 months ago
    • Jewoo525
      I did indeed! Didn’t want to draw too much attention to it until they were ready. Glad to see she’s feeling better enough to (I think) read.

      Thank you for your kind comments as always John, I appreciate them! 
      LikeReply6 months ago
  • David_Zeoli
    I always struggle to turn a phrase in a way that makes the reader pause and reflect. I envy your ability to do that. I love this poem, especially the third stanza. Very well written.
    LikeReply 26 months ago
    • Jewoo525
      Thanks David! I enjoyed writing this one a lot.
      LikeReply6 months ago

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