A Kinder Scent Of Coming Spring



When snails shed their shyness
their homeless cousins timid still
Spiders invite themselves in for tea
their gifted lattice weave drapes the old TV

When the fog’s faces don’t illicit fear
Cheeks pressed up against the clear pane
harmless degenerates placing bets on droplets
skiing down the open window slope

When countryside thunder forgets itself
clapping as spectator with no command
Pulling clouds over its head to sleep
drifting away so all may nap

When the monsoon storm refuses to rage
grants permission for its yawns to wander free
The playful young gales swing through the racks
knowing they can’t afford any hanging dresses

Nothing happens in the in-between
Relax those fangs but purse your lips
quietly breathe and willfully surrender
to a kinder scent of coming spring

About this poem

I welcome Winter, for it's when I'm most in my element and comfortable- to the point where Spring often feels foreign to me.

Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Submitted by Jewoo525 on September 24, 2023

42 sec read
71

Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAA XXXX XXXX XAXX XXXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 799
Words 141
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Je Woo Han

Korean college student, amateur poet. more…

All Je Woo Han poems | Je Woo Han Books

10 fans

Discuss the poem A Kinder Scent Of Coming Spring with the community...

0 Comments

    Translation

    Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

    Select another language:

    • - Select -
    • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
    • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
    • Español (Spanish)
    • Esperanto (Esperanto)
    • 日本語 (Japanese)
    • Português (Portuguese)
    • Deutsch (German)
    • العربية (Arabic)
    • Français (French)
    • Русский (Russian)
    • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
    • 한국어 (Korean)
    • עברית (Hebrew)
    • Gaeilge (Irish)
    • Українська (Ukrainian)
    • اردو (Urdu)
    • Magyar (Hungarian)
    • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
    • Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Italiano (Italian)
    • தமிழ் (Tamil)
    • Türkçe (Turkish)
    • తెలుగు (Telugu)
    • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
    • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
    • Čeština (Czech)
    • Polski (Polish)
    • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
    • Românește (Romanian)
    • Nederlands (Dutch)
    • Ελληνικά (Greek)
    • Latinum (Latin)
    • Svenska (Swedish)
    • Dansk (Danish)
    • Suomi (Finnish)
    • فارسی (Persian)
    • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
    • հայերեն (Armenian)
    • Norsk (Norwegian)
    • English (English)

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "A Kinder Scent Of Coming Spring" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 9 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/170311/a-kinder-scent-of-coming-spring>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    22
    days
    14
    hours
    55
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    The pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables in a poem is called _______.
    A verse
    B rhyme
    C rhythm
    D meter