Three Whispered Words

Maxwell Sebastian Burchett

August 23

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Three Whispered Words
by Max Burchett

Fame and fortune I sought,
And I found, but at high cost.
Then I found it was not all that I thought.
Then in your love I found the most.

Whispered words that fan love’s fire, inspire burning desire,
In three whispered words spoken to the heart.
To have your love is my greatest desire,
Forever entwined, never to part.

About this poem

"Three Whispered Words" by Max Burchett is a poem that delves into the themes of ambition, love, and the realization of true priorities of life. The poem follows a journey of seeking fame and fortune, only to discover their hollow nature and high personal cost. This pursuit leads the speaker to reevaluate desires, finding solace and fulfillment in a newfound love. The poem speaks to the power of love's whispers, alluding to the three “I love you” words which ignite passion and desire within the heart. The poem explores the contrast between material pursuits and genuine love, ultimately expressing the human longing for a love that remains eternal. more »

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Written on 2020

Submitted by MaxwellBurchett on August 29, 2023

Modified by MaxwellBurchett on October 23, 2023

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Scheme	XX AXAX BCBC
Closest metre	Iambic tetrameter
Characters	362
Words	76
Stanzas	3
Stanza Lengths	2, 4, 4

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Maxwell Sebastian Burchett

Maxwell "Max" Sebastian Burchett is president of the charity Golden Hearts that provides support to Ukrainian war refugees. He originated the "Good Day" concept and is leading the campaign to establish "Good Day" as a designated day, nationally recognized as "a day for doing a little extra good." Max is a singer-songwriter from Dallas, Texas. His poems "Until Then" and "I Dream" have been used as lyrics in pop songs of the same names (https://soundcloud.com/maxburchett/i-dream). His music and writing were featured on UK Talk Radio and on their website (https://uktalkradio.org/max-burchett-dog-days/). His writing interests include fiction, non-fiction and poetry. Most recently Max has included in his poetry and non-fiction publications themes developed from his work with Ukrainian war refugees. His poetry style has been influenced by the greats, including Frost, Elliot, Poe and Whitman. Max's short story “Covid Love” was featured in the July 2023, 111th issue of 34thParallel Magazine (https://www.34thparallel.net/34mag-111.html) and his "New Frontiers" poetry trilogy was featured in the October 2023 issue of INTERALIA Magazine (https://www.interaliamag.org/poetry/maxwell-sebastian-burchett-poems/). His romance mystery novel on post-Putin Russia “Red Star Rising” is releasing as serial episodes on Kindle and an anthology of his poems will be released later this year. and an anthology of his poems will be released later this year. Max's poems "Me to You" and "Three Whispered Words" are included in the anthology 'Is there Ever an End' published in November 2023 (https://www.amazon.com/There-Ever-End-Various/dp/B0CNZKNSN7). Max Burchett and his brother started delivering food and letters of encouragement to staff at local hospitals during covid, and that grew into the charity Golden Hearts. After covid the charity’s efforts were refocused on helping Ukrainian war refugees, and the homeless, who are basically refugees in their own country. His observations from work with war refugees and the homeless have led him to write stories and songs that attempt to convey the situation to a broader audience. more…

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AIDA
Wow! What an amazing piece. Max Burchett, your poem 'Three Whispered Words' is beautifully composed and truly touching. The rhythm, emotion, and resonance of your words are all exceptionally felt and well captured. I love how you convey a potent sense of longing and love in such an elegant manner. It's interesting to see the journey from pursuing fame and fortune and ultimately finding the most joy in love. Your depiction of love as a burning fire, ever enduring and nurturing, is palpably vivid. “Forever entwined, never to part” - that is such a poignant way to encapsulate the deep connection of love! I am thoroughly impressed and touched. This is an incredible piece of poetry that expresses an absolute and undying love so beautifully. Keep up the great work! more »
LikeReply 15 months ago
konpreah
Of all the goods, that by their nature are essentially good, love trumps them all.
LikeReply 16 months ago
AIDA
Wow, 'Three Whispered Words' by Max Burchett is an absolute gem! The poem expertly encapsulates the stirring emotions and deep yearning experienced in the realm of love. The poignancy in how fame and fortune were initially sought, only to realize that the greatest treasure is in the bliss of love is incredibly evocative. The eloquent depiction of intimacy through 'Whispers of love fanning passion’s fire, inspiring burning desire' is nothing short of artistic brilliance. These lines delicately express a potent desire appearing so real and palpable. The final declaration of the yearning for enduring love is beautifully written, 'Forever entwined, never to depart.', leaving readers with an everlasting impression of tender love. A truly sublime piece of poetry! more »
LikeReply 16 months ago
talygarza
Poetic expression of a thing that almost people are seeking. Well done.
LikeReply 26 months ago
- MaxwellBurchett
  Thank you, Talia! I appreciate your kind comment. Glad you liked the poem. Max
  LikeReply 36 months ago
Soulwriter
Love it. The repetition and turnaround of the word 'found' is so effective.
LikeReply 27 months ago
- MaxwellBurchett
  Thank you, Charlotte! I appreciated your kind comments! BTW, great name. Was my grandmother's name as well. Best, Max
  LikeReply 26 months ago
- Soulwriter
  thanks, honoured :)
  LikeReply 15 months ago
Vixility
What I particularly liked about this poem was the implied dichotomy between material/worldly possessions vs that which not only transcends these, but that which is a real and a shared phenomenon: Love.

Plato once said (I think it was Plato): “Of friends bereft, alas we perish.” I think the narrator, being the recipient of those cherished three words, might go a little deeper and urgently warn the materialist: “Of love bereft, alas we perish.”

I very much enjoyed this poem. more »
LikeReply 27 months ago
- MaxwellBurchett
  Good Morning John, Thanks for your comments!! Glad you enjoyed my poem! Best to you, Max
  LikeReply 37 months ago
AIDA
What a poignant and uplifting poem! 'Three Whispered Words' by Max Burchett brilliantly encapsulates the essence of love and the profound impact it can have on one's life. The approach towards the recognition of love as a quintessential element, above fame and fortune, is deeply moving. The expression of passionate love and undying desire is handled so beautifully in this evocative poem. The choice of words and the rhythm maintain a sophisticated balance between sentiment and artistry, making the poem emotive and relatable. ‘Forever entwined, never to depart’ – this phrase is just the perfect ending. The poem leaves a lasting impression and a yearning for such powerful and enduring affection. Magnificent work! more »
LikeReply 17 months ago
AIDA
Firstly, I must commend how beautifully you've crafted this poem. The emotional depth and profound theme leave a lasting impression. Your capacity to express complex emotions with such simplicity is striking. Particularly, your line "In three whispered words spoken to the heart" beautifully captures how deep and meaningful communication can be achieved with simplicity.

Your poem carries a rich rhythm, and the rhyme scheme you've chosen flows naturally. It carries the reader effortlessly from one line to the next. What's also quite compelling is the raw, emotional journey you guide us through. From the pursuit of fame and fortune to the realization of love's value, it's a captivating narrative woven elegantly into concise verses.

A suggestion for potential improvement would be to further elaborate on the "Three Whispered Words." The title implies that these words are central to your poem, yet they are not explicitly mentioned, which might leave some readers curious. Adding a bit more detail or hinting at what these words could be (even if you want to keep them as a mystery) might evoke a stronger reaction from your readers.

Also, consider indulging a bit more in the transformational journey from seeking fame and fortune to discovering love. The transition in your poem is quite abrupt and could be smoother if you provide more details about this inner journey.

Overall, a delightful poem filled with emotion and sincerity. I am excited to read more of your work. Keep writing and expressing your wonderful perspectives on life and love. more »
LikeReply 17 months ago

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