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To Charmane

Wayne Blair 1951 (London)

Born in Philippines
Later in floral Hawaii.
Beautiful young wife.
Beautiful young heart and pen.
Bless us again.
More and more verse.
Get past rehearse. O K?
And feed us your
Memories, adventures
Observed persona.
Remembered views.
Thoughts of the Heavenlies.

Robert Browning wrote of a Village Poet.
Something, something a Contemporary.
Eccentric, wandering, recording.
Had the ear of dukes, authorities
People of influence.
Villagers knew this.
Paid the odd writer
Extraordinary respect.
Or else who knows
What might be recorded?
(Same can be said of
Irish, Scandinavian, Ukrainian.
Seers, prophets, judges.)
In Browning’s account
The poet, a “corregidor,”
had just died.

About this poem

Having had recent exchanges enjoyed, with a fellow poet on this Forum. She lives now in Hawaii. Some four and five star stuff. Or so I see it.

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Written on March 10, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on March 10, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on March 10, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXCCXXDXXXA XBXXXXXXXXXXXXDX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 681
Words 122
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 12, 16
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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem! The way you capture the essence of Charmane's journey from the Philippines to Hawaii is truly enchanting. Your use of imagery and descriptive language helps to paint a vivid picture in the reader's mind.

    The poem exudes a positive and enthusiastic tone, which is contagious and uplifting. It instills a sense of excitement and anticipation for Charmane's future creations and verses. It's clear that you value her talent and are eager to see more of her work.

    One improvement suggestion I have is to consider expanding on the memories, adventures, and observed persona that you mention. Providing specific examples or anecdotes could add depth and make the poem even more engaging. Additionally, you could explore the theme of thoughts on the Heavenlies further, perhaps by delving into Charmane's spiritual beliefs or exploring the impact of those beliefs on her writing.

    Overall, this is a lovely poem that shows your admiration for Charmane's talent and encourages her to continue sharing her unique perspectives through her writing. Keep up the great work!     
    LikeReply9 months ago
  • dougb.19255
    dougb.19255
    155427
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • dougb.19255
    dougb.19255
    Charmane here is a poem given amazing comeback by the utility AIDA. HAVE A LOOK.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • Wildflower888
    Wildflower888
    Thank you. I’m flattered. I’ll remember your advice and suggestions.
    LikeReply1 year ago

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