dire solver



love maker  
dire solver   
can I shake her  
     
my brown eyes raider   
a feeble tenor  
 
 tune soother   
an eternal quiver  
     
when she’s closer    
I feel the seizer  
                
a permanent collar   
questions simmer  
           
about a rumor   
I’m asking why?    
   
I’m asking why?   
Demanding an answer    
         
 caution & deliver   
a delicate torture  
           
causing faith to splinter   
a self-reminder  
of a past soldier   
armed with paper    
the legend paler   
I am the next  
forgotten wonder  
   
depriving me of your forever   
hunt me down under  
   
with tense temper   
my novice predator    
before I meet my maker   
in an eternal ceremony crater   
for the redemption of a bleak blunder   
I’m asking you why?  

I’m asking you why?   
Do you feel better? 

About this poem

trying to understand my faith in her

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Written on October 12, 2022

Submitted by azdi404 on December 25, 2022

Modified by azdi404 on March 20, 2023

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Scheme aaa aa aa aa aa aB Ba aa aaaaaxa aa aaaaaB Ba
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 961
Words 178
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 42, 2

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