Analysis of dire solver



love maker  
dire solver   
can I shake her  
     
my brown eyes raider   
a feeble tenor  
 
 tune soother   
an eternal quiver  
     
when she’s closer    
I feel the seizer  
                
a permanent collar   
questions simmer  
           
about a rumor   
I’m asking why?    
   
I’m asking why?   
Demanding an answer    
         
 caution & deliver   
a delicate torture  
           
causing faith to splinter   
a self-reminder  
of a past soldier   
armed with paper    
the legend paler   
I am the next  
forgotten wonder  
   
depriving me of your forever   
hunt me down under  
   
with tense temper   
my novice predator    
before I meet my maker   
in an eternal ceremony crater   
for the redemption of a bleak blunder   
I’m asking you why?  

I’m asking you why?   
Do you feel better? 


Scheme aaa aa aa aa aa aB Ba aa aaaaaxa aa aaaaaB Ba
Poetic Form
Metre 110 110 1110 1 11110 01010 1 11 101010 1 1110 1101 1 010010 1010 1 01010 1101 1 1101 010110 1 10010 010010 1 101110 01010 10110 1110 0101 1101 01010 1 010111010 11110 1 1110 110100 0111110 0101010010 1001010110 11011 11011 11110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 961
Words 178
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 42, 2
Lines Amount 44
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 257
Words per stanza (avg) 86

About this poem

trying to understand my faith in her

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Written on October 12, 2022

Submitted by azdi404 on December 25, 2022

Modified by azdi404 on March 20, 2023

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