Analysis of Overwhelmed to no End
Overwhelmed to no End
I get sick on bus rides
I stay awake until I cry
I look outside
I can’t see the horizon this time
Maybe the sun set or maybe it’s gone
Maybe I’m okay, or maybe I’m wrong
Heart it breaks right in two
I don’t know what to do
Stomach rumbles high and low
Pushing forward, but where should I go
I left you there all alone
And yet here you are, please watch your tone
When you speak like that
When you speak like that
I know I messed up, I can see
I'm sorry I let you be
Homework drowns me like a flood
But there’s no excuse of how I have shut
You out of my mind and out of my head
I think about you when I go to bed
I think about all that we had
I don’t understand sis, why you aren’t mad
I hear your whispers and I hear your cries
I’m sorry I’m the one who left this time
Losing my sanity over you
Pushing forward and then I pull back through
Confused every day
Don’t know what to say
When you speak like that
When you speak like that
Im losing my friends
And I’m losing it all
I try to believe but I fall
I try to trust in God above
But it’s hard when I think of our love
Im sorry I left you, I didn’t mean to shove
You out but here I stand
With my shaking hands
Im sorry I forgot you
Im sorry I stopped caring
I know you hurt when I see you glaring
When I see your nostrils flaring
I fall apart when I close my eyes
If I fell I dreamt I’d flied
When I see the trees I hear the ocean breeze
When I run away I try to silence my wheeze
I know I haven’t tried
Yet you’ve always been right by my side
I want you to know this time
I won’t choose to leave you behind
I see those tears as they fall
I know I act like I don’t care at all
But I swear I do
I try my best to push through
I try my hardest to understand you
But I can’t read these social cues
I hide away under the dark after day
I imagine myself in a better place where I’m understood
A place where I wondered if I could
But when I see the state of this friendship we have
I know it’s beyond repair
But if you ever need it I’ll be right there
I know I can’t undo all that I’ve done
I know I can’t change what I’ve become
But I want you to know I would do anything for you
I know we’re so distant, but we can push on through
We are best friends for a reason
Trust me when I say this discomfort is only for a season
So if you fall, I’ll pick you up
And if you get lost I’ll show you the way
I hope you know
I love you
11-7-22
Wednesday, December 7th, 2022
Scheme | x xx ab xx cc dd ee FF gg xx hh ii jb cc kk FF xl lm mm xx cn nn ja oo aa bx ll cc cx kp px qq rx cc rr xk dc xx |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 01111 111111 11010111 1111 111001011 1001111011 101111011 111101 111111 1010101 101011111 1111101 011111111 11111 11111 11111111 1101111 111101 1110111111 1111101111 1101111111 11011111 1101111101 1111001111 1101011111 101100101 1010011111 011001 11111 11111 11111 11011 011011 11101111 11110101 1111111101 11011111111 111111 11101 1101011 1101110 1111111110 11111010 110111111 1111111 11101110101 111011111011 11111 11111111 1111111 11111101 1111111 1111111111 11111 1111111 111101011 11111101 11011001101 10101001011101 011110111 111101111011 1110101 11110111111 1111011111 111111101 1111111111011 110110111111 11111010 1111110101101010 11111111 0111111101 1111 111 1 1001011 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 2,532 |
Words | 569 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 38 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2 |
Lines Amount | 75 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 49 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 14 |
About this poem
A poem I wrote for my friend. The intro is just my thought process before it turned to what I really wanted to say.
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Written on December 07, 2022
Submitted by katherineb.45444 on December 10, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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