Analysis of NIGHTMARE JOURNEY
You journey through a land
Of active volcanoes and fire,
Where corpses line the streets
And your survival chances are dire.
And mounds of grinning skulls
Fill the roads and the alleyways,
Streets are flowing with crimson
Beneath the blood moon's rays.
Manticores and Leviathans
Haunt this dreadful place,
Formless wraiths glide in the wind
To wrap around your helpless face:
Sucking out your very life force
They steal away your final breath,
Leaving behind an empty husk
Leaving your body draped in death.
You journey through a land
Where compassion is unknown,
Inhaling thick, polluted air, through
which only dead things have flown.
Fire and brimstone filling
Your aching, burning chest,
In a land where nothing lives long
And death will be your only rest.
You travel through fallen buildings
Avoiding lethal rocks slides,
In this land of foul acid rain
Where myriad innocents have died.
In your endless questing
You know you ever must go on,
Unaware the reaper is following
Overtaking you before long.
THE END
© Copyright 2022 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | Axbx xcxc bdxd xefe Agxg hiji xxxx fxhj xxx |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 110101 110010010 110101 010101011 011101 1010010 1110110 010111 101 11101 111001 11011101 10111011 11011101 10011101 10110101 110101 1010101 010101011 1101111 1001010 110101 00111011 01111101 11011010 0101011 01111101 110010011 01101 11110111 010101100 1001011 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,087 |
Words | 201 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 25 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 97 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 20 |
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You journey through a land Of active volcanoes and fire, Where corpses line the streets And your survival chances are dire.
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Written on December 09, 2021
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on January 23, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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