JoseCanUC
  Bronze Member

Wow. Very well expressed.

I like the message. The poem flowed well and was easy to read.

I like this one. Good piece of work. I often wonder how many people, who have convinced themselves that they are doing God's work, are going to be standing at the gates of hell wondering what happened.

Oh my goodness. I cant pretend to feel what you felt and what you are feeling but what you expressed in your writing certainly allowed one to get close. I wish you would not have had to go through that loss. more »

Every scar has a story and has a contribution to who we are. Some more than others. Thanks for sharing those feelings. They sparked some reminiscing about some of my own.

I can really relate to this. We just bought a house and were moving all of our things. I was forever finding notes in drawers, boxes, and coat pockets of where I had a thought and wrote it down so I could expand on it later. more »

I really like the way you write and I feel privileged to be introduced to some of your deeper feelings.

Wow! This is a great community. This was my first time entering a piece of work and I really enjoyed reading all of the other entries. My poem didn't win nor did the poem I voted for, yet I still feel like a winner in being surrounded by you all. more »

The story in the poem was easy to follow due to a good flow and the use of appropriate words.

Well done.

Oh how many times I have been in this situation except it never had the happy ending like this. Enjoyed reading this poem.

I like this one. My thoughts often track along these same lines.

Thanks for sharing.

I get it and can relate. Thanks for sharing.