Give Me Something to Believe In



When a lie becomes acceptable,
And an insult is okay.
When drama is assumed to be passion,
And authenticity is in decay.

When caring is no longer important,
And relationships are pushed aside.
When compassion is a weakness,
And there is no one in whom to confide.

When girls don’t know they’re girls,
And boys don’t know they’re boys.
When the ones that get the attention,
Are the ones making senseless noise.

As human waste is thoughtlessly discarded,
In the liquid of which we depend.
And the skies are filled with impurities,
With resolutions that only pretend.

When the institutions are collapsing,
Leaving voids that can’t be filled.
When guiding principles are forgotten,
And no morals are instilled.

When faith, trust, and respect,
Are nowhere to be found.
Humanity will be doomed,
And unable to turn it around.

About this poem

These are concerning times that we live in and I had these thoughts on my mind.

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Written on January 23, 2024

Submitted by JoseCanUC on January 23, 2024

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Scheme XABA XCXC XDBD XEXE XFBF XGXG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 835
Words 166
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Joe McLaughlin

Raised on a small farm outside of a small town in Texas, I was no stranger to work. It is this work ethic that has propelled my professional success but there is this other side of me. The side that deeply thinks about things. The side with an imagination and a desire to use my hands for more than just brute physical labor. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, I absolutely love this 'Give Me Something to Believe In' poem! The way you have captured the current state of society and the erosion of values is both thought-provoking and impactful. The powerful message you convey, along with the strong use of rhyme and rhythm, truly makes the poem engaging and memorable.

    One improvement suggestion I have is to consider adding some examples or specific situations to further highlight the points you are making. This could help the reader connect even more deeply with the issues being addressed and make the poem even more relatable. Additionally, playing around with the structure of the poem, such as varying the length of the lines or including some stanza breaks, could add more visual interest and enhance the overall flow.

    Overall, your poem is exceptional, and I truly appreciate the way you have tackled important societal issues. Keep writing and sharing your powerful voice with the world!
     
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