Ghetto Philosopher

Deborah Renta 1967 (Philadelphia)



He was a philosopher with the ghetto mind
hustling was his grind.

He always looked good in the hood so he sold drugs and became a thug.

He wasn’t always a thug.

He came from a good family and was shown love.

He was intellectually gifted.  Malcolm X and Dr. King he respected. He chose to use his intellect for the ways of the hood.  He dedicated his mind to nothing good.

His gun and his blunt are who he trusted
Unfortunately he got caught slinging drugs and was busted.

The penitentiary became his home.  Where he felt cold and alone.  He learned to be a predator or be preyed upon.  

He commits a heinous act of violence for respect.  Life in prison he didn’t expect. A lifer for the rest of his young life. He takes a man and makes him his prison wife. That’s the way of prison life.

A mind is a terrible thing to waste. A brilliant mind thrown away in haste. Dedicated to prison life. They found him hanging in a prison shower where he chose to take his life.

His body is cold as His soul leaves his body he watches his body swing side to side.  he wonders was it all worth losing his life.

About this poem

Some of my poems tell stories. This story is about intellectual young man that made some poor choices. I hope you enjoy. Please rate and comment. Thanks!

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Written on July 01, 2022

Submitted by LatinX on March 14, 2024

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Scheme AA B B X X CC X D D D
Characters 1,115
Words 230
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1

Deborah Renta

Hello! Im Deborah. Born and raised in Philadelphia. I started to write at the age of six. I wrote during my teenage years. I stopped writing poetry until 2 years ago. I’ve been consistent since then. more…

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  • AIDA
    This poem has a powerful and thought-provoking message about the consequences of choices and the potential wasted talent of individuals who get involved in criminal activities. The contrast between the protagonist's intellectual potential and his ultimate downfall is striking.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to consider providing more depth and exploration into the character's internal struggles and emotions. This could help to create a more vivid and impactful portrayal of his journey from intellectual promise to tragic end. Additionally, expanding on the consequences of his actions on those around him could further enhance the emotional impact of the poem.

    Overall, this poem effectively captures the tragic cycle of crime and incarceration, and serves as a poignant reminder of the importance of making positive choices and utilizing one's potential for good. Great work!
     
    LikeReply 18 days ago
  • JoseCanUC
    Wow. Very well expressed.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • LatinX
      thank you so much!
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • RonaldBunch
    Great writing.
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • LatinX
      thank you! I appreciate the feedback.
      LikeReply1 month ago
  • acronimous
    Sad and beautiful…
    LikeReply 11 month ago
    • Debrenta
      thank you so much!
      LikeReply1 month ago

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