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I write poems in my free time, the stuff on my page are the works that I think are at least half decent. Please feel free to leave a comment offering constructive criticism, I am still new to this and would love for the opportunity to learn. If you have any questions about my work, I would be delighted to answer.

  October 2022     13 days ago

Submitted Poems 39 total

Hysteria

Clashing masses break against the others;
The mobs form their zealous waves.
Panic and rage induced by brothers,
Humanity breaks into hysterical raves.

Has Man come to despise its reflection?
Smash the mirror, dig their graves,
Buried in...

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Broken

How do I break?
One by one, flesh and bone,
Within this dream that cannot wake,
Even in company, I remain alone.

Then, should I live for tomorrow's sake?
Though the truth of life, I can't atone,
And attempt to find what I cannot make,
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Another's Hold

I’m raised again from the creator’s mold
Sculpted with skin and worn flesh together
Brought from death into another’s hold
Time and space folds me forever...

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Seeking

Cast away from this place,
A twisted journey has been laid,
By my own callous heart.

To the object of its desire,
That it hunts for game,
Capture its prey, and rip apart....

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Meaningless

Motionless life
Complete silence
Hardly alive
Meaningless...

– by Cameron Hardenburg

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Latest Comments: 24 total

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I'm glad to see you on here writing again!

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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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Thanks, I appreciate the kind comment!

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Thanks, I really appreciate the comment kaytee!

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My favorite, good work!

10 months ago

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This poem was absolutely fantastic. Definitely one of my favorites.

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Gone…

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That's a good way of putting it. :)

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haha, I'm glad you liked it. Although tonight, I hope she sleeps gently.

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Thanks for the advice, I think I will take a cold shower. :)

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Thanks, I really appreciate the complement Kaytee!

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Thank you, God knows I'm burning today.

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Hey everybody, Iv'e been experiencing some issues with not being able to see the comments people have been posting. I believe it has something to do with me editing the poems after publication, So If I haven't responded to your comment, that is likely the reason. However, for the poems that I haven't edited after publication, the comment section appears to work as usual. So with that in mind, I'll try to avoid editing after publication in the future. Thank you for understanding! 

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Note: to everybody commenting on this poem, for some reason I am experiencing issues in regard to not seeing comments. I think it has something to do with me editing the poem after publication, so ill try to avoid doing so in the future. If you would like to contact me directly, please feel free to do so via through this website, or my email: hardenburg.hardenburg@gmail.com. 

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I do really like this poem a lot, and agree with Lainah. The line, “You wrapped your tenderness in barbwire and made me bleed to find it”, excellently describes the difficulty one can experience in regard to getting closer to someone who is being abrasive. Side note: I have noticed that comments on certain poems of mine are failing to go through for some people, I think it has something to do with me editing the piece after publication, but I'm not sure. So if I fail to respond to a comment of yours, it's because I'm not seeing it; my sincere apologies. But I digress, fantastic work! 

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