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I am 61 years old, live in Los Angeles by way of Chicago been here 7 years. I am a Widower, I was Married for 1 year and lost my Wife to a brain embolism. I have been guilty of being in love with being in love which drives a good deal of my poetry as I tried to work out all the emotions involved with too many love affairs. I have had the love of two lifetimes which is why it took me 50 years to get married! I never thought it would happen for me and it happened exactly like I'd always dreamed it would, even after I stopped dreaming! She was perfectly imperfect and everything I could have asked for! It was short but so sweet and well worth the journey. You can follow the journey through my poems. [I feel the need to make a qualifying statement; I have always been a believer in Jesus Christ, what I have not always been is a committed follower of his teachings! I have been, like many "Christians," a Church goer and a Carnal Christian. I have always been committed to love, (sharing, caring, and being there) but was doing it in the wrong spirit! (The Scorpio spirit) Much of my poetry was written in that spirit, but this is about a journey and I assure you, while I never lose my passion for love, I do ultimately get saved and by the time I get married I am writing and loving in the Spirit of Christ! But you'll have to wait for the book for that story.]

  September 2021     2 months ago

Submitted Poems 19 total

Passionate You,Passionate Me, Passionate We"

"Passionate You, Passionate Me, Passionate We"


  Impetuous you says; "I'm not gonna make it to the house baby, I need you now!"

  Acquiescent me says; "I feel you baby, no time for love like now!"

  Simultaneous we; look to the back seat and...

by Kenneth Carson

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Loves Madness

Dearest ______

This is a letter born of madness. A madness fueled by the fire of Unrequited Love. You must know that I love you? All my efforts to the contrary have been an exercise in futility! I have loved you from the first moment I saw you....

by Kenneth Carson

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"Our Last Kiss Goodnight"

"Our Last Kiss Goodnight"

You crawl into my arms,
Filling me with your smile,
Your warmth and your sent.

The kisses start,
Slow at first, soft,
Two nose hugs, then I Love...

by Kenneth Carson

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"Traveling The Universe Of Your Eyes"

"Traveling The Universe Of Your Eyes"

I look into your eyes and travel a universe created in...

by Kenneth Carson

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"Angel Of Mercy On The Expo Line"

"Angel Of Mercy On The Expo Line"

I'm all aboard with an "Interstellar" mind, lessons abound, fore & aft!
  Seems the first, last and current truth is pain!

Then, in walks an...

by Kenneth Carson

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I was going through this today and just wanted to thank you for your comment and for all the love you have shared with me over the last couple of years, your friendship has truly been a blessing!

3 months ago

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Thank you for the comment. I hope that people can see blessing of the love we shared in our last moments together!
Thanks again!

3 months ago

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This is a well written poem with an all to familer them. I felt my self taking this journey with the pen and ink and paper and pencil, know that the first place you make love is in the mind, and then you're using your ink to play connect the dots and you connect them all and come out with a picture of a love that you want to present as your present! And then you pray that she will accept the gift! I've been here, maybe not quite as elegant, but I feel you! Well done and wishing you all the best with that! 

1 year ago

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Wow, this is a poem of hope a clarity in a time of loss and disparity, much needed and much appreciated! Well done!

2 years ago

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Great Poem Bro, you sound like a lover, nothing wrong with that it's what makes life worth living!

2 years ago

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thank you so much, I will always count her my greatest blessing and always give thanks for the journey that brought me to her.

2 years ago

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I always appreciate your rating my poems and leaving comments! Blessings!

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If you view my poems, please let me know what you think, that will help so much! Blessings!

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I love the reflection!

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Wow, I can feel the catharsis taking place in my life with this poem! I want to say how sorry O am for your loss and how thankful I am you made it through. Theses are the days that test our souls and reveal how and where we find life! 

2 years ago

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Nice poem, love the imagery.

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I love this poem, the reason you wrote it and that endless hope for that moment.

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