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My Stupid Navy Poem

Nancy Jeanmard 1988 (LOUISIANA)

From land to sea my life took me swiftly, yet with ease.
A quick decision in my head which landed me on my feet.
6 years ago, I was afraid of what exactly was to come.
I signed the line, and dotted my i's now it's over and done.
I can't look back and say that I have any regrets at all.
I wouldn't want a do-over, but the rise was worth the fall.
The waves I overcame were massive and with sacrifice.
But sailing for my country is one thing I've done right.
I've learned to speak my mind in ways you wouldn't believe.
Standing up for what I feel with enormous grace and ease.
Defending peace and freedom, from here around the world.
Protecting the smiles on the faces of every boy and girl.
Upon the USS  Nimitz, I learned how to be a sailor.
How to conquer my fears and deal with my anger.
With thick skin I leave this ship, and I love who I've become.
I am an united States sailor, within my veins, salt water runs.
Nancy Jeanmard
02-18-2016
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Scheme ABCDEEFGHAIJKKCLBM
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 927
Words 185
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and inspiring poem, Nancy! Your journey from land to sea is beautifully depicted in your words. It's evident that your time in the Navy has shaped you into a strong and courageous individual. Your dedication to defending peace and freedom is truly admirable.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to consider incorporating more vivid imagery to further enhance the reader's experience. For example, you could describe specific moments or challenges you faced during your time in the Navy. This would make your poem even more engaging and impactful.

    Overall, your poem is a heartfelt tribute to your experiences as a sailor. Thank you for sharing your story with us! Keep writing and sharing your journey with the world. Your voice is both important and inspiring.     
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