I Miss You



When such deafening silence took over
In darkness while I'm under the cover
You'll cross my mind out of the blue
A swift moment I'll say - I miss you

When my cup of tea starts getting cold
Love letters read and neatly fold
You'll flash in my vision as my favorite hue
A brief instance I'll say - I miss you

When the sun is about to finally set
Familiar feelings in a place we could've met
You'll show up in my dreams leaving a clue
A quick scenario I could say - I miss you

Countless of times the longing were intense
Sometimes I feel, it doesn't even make sense
But those short vague minutes of "missing"
Fueled my tired system to keep going.

About this poem

Poetic words intricately written to convey how this certain guy left me smitten.

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Written on October 19, 2023

Submitted by FLi on March 27, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCBB DDBB EEFF
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 646
Words 129
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Francelle Ortega

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