Surviving the Moments



The pain builds within,
I turn my head to the skies.
The emotion takes over,
And tears stream from my eyes.

Loneliness and sorrow scatter,
As each drop hits the floor.
My hands reach for the sky,
I can’t take, anymore.

With tightly clinched teeth,
I force out a prayer.
Angry and selfish words,
But I don’t care.

My guardian angel calms me,
And lifts me to my feet.
She soothes my aching soul,
And removes feelings of defeat.

I have survived another moment,
Despite the perpetual strife.
I attempt to dry my eyes,
And continue with a normal life.

About this poem

We never know what most of the people around us are going through. Fighting back against depression is a battle and most people didn't know this was going on in my life.

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Written on February 23, 2002

Submitted by JoseCanUC on November 07, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABA BCXC XDXD XEXE XFAF
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 554
Words 123
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Joe McLaughlin

Raised on a small farm outside of a small town in Texas, I was no stranger to work. It is this work ethic that has propelled my professional success but there is this other side of me. The side that deeply thinks about things. The side with an imagination and a desire to use my hands for more than just brute physical labor. more…

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  • lovingempath
    I like everything about this poem: Form, function, deep emotions that come with it. I'll be back to read more of your poetry Joe.
    LikeReply5 months ago

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