Dear Grandma



Dear grandma,

I could see you were just as stunned as I
When drifting its Body traversed our sky:
Noiseless, Black, Slow, it moved right overhead
Without a rumble, a wave, or goodbye.

It surprised me, too, that you showed no dread
As it angled left from our view ahead ...
I wanted to talk about it for years,
But you preferred silence on it instead.

I shared the event with some trusted peers,
But after the laughter, their jokes and jeers,
I opted for silence and, much like you,
Concealed the Mystery from skeptic ears.

Had our eyes neglected the vaulted blue,
And that Black Anomaly passing through,
Would we be better having never known
What eyes unbeholding would deem untrue?

Perhaps? Either way, I do not bemoan—
For you were with me there, and you alone!
So, with peace I place this letter upon
That memory shared, and this old headstone.

     World without end, grandma ...
        Your grandson,

          John

About this poem

Inspired by a surreal event my grandmother and I experienced.

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Submitted by Vixility on December 17, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABA BBCB CXDC DDED EEXE XX A
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 951
Words 192
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 1

John W. May

John W. May has lived in Colorado all his life. He currently works in the field of ophthalmology and loves to mountain bike and read about history. John first became a lover of poetry in 2008 after having read a poem by John Milton. He has been reading and studying the works of various poets since. His favorite poets are Emily Dickinson, Fyodor Tyutchev and W. B. Yeats. more…

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6 Comments
  • jennybabygirl6982
    You're surely welcome. ☺
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • jennybabygirl6982
    Ty John.... Appreciate it!
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • adam.gutteridge
    I love the scheme/structure of the poem—the way the last line of each stanza knits the previous ones together.
    It sounds like an unforgettable sight that you and your grandmother saw. It’s amazing how a moment can stay with us forever.
    A wonderful poem coloured with mystery and intrigue. Moreover, a precious memory of your grandmother encapsulated in a piece of art. Brilliant John! Thank you for sharing this. 
    LikeReply3 months ago
    • Vixility
      The scheme/structure was experimental.
      I wanted it to take on the form of a letter and I thought the Rubaiyat stanza would be perfect. Not what I would consider my best piece, but I had a really fun time working it out.

      The event, yes, was literally otherworldly.
       
      LikeReply3 months ago
  • jennybabygirl6982
    Sorry John for my typos. Bless you. ;)
    LikeReply 13 months ago
    • Vixility
      You’re too kind. Thank you for stopping by …
      LikeReply3 months ago
  • jennybabygirl6982
    I loved this poem
    Very touching indeed. Thanks for sharing Kohn W May.
    LikeReply 13 months ago
  • lovingempath
    I had to choke back a tear on this one John.
    LikeReply 13 months ago
    • Vixility
      Aww … thank you Robin.
      LikeReply 13 months ago

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