Love is Blind



In a world veiled in eternal night,
Lived a girl, her spirit a beacon bright.
Blind, yet with a heart brimming with glee,
Beside her, love stood, steadfast as the sea.

He, her anchor in the endless dark,
Promised to be her eternal spark.
"If only for once, the world I could see,
I'd give my hand to thee," she whispered tenderly.

Fate, in its mysterious weave,
Heard her sighs one quiet eve.
A surgeon's skill, a chance for sight,
To lift her from perpetual night.

Under careful hands, her world transformed,
To vibrant vistas, as her vision formed.
Nature's canvas, in splendid hue,
Unfurled before her, a dream come true.

Fields of gold, skies painted in twilight's blush,
Rivers gleaming like the dawn's first flush.
Each blossom, each leaf, in sun's embrace,
Danced before her, a newfound grace.

Yet, in her gaze, her lover's face to find,
She met a truth, unforeseen, unkind.
His world, untouched by light's caress,
Mirrored her past, in its sightless abyss.

Her heart, now adrift in a sea of sight,
Wavered, lost in newfound light.
"I yearn for one who shares my visual song,
In this world where I now belong."

With a soul torn, he stepped away,
Leaving a letter, his final say.
"Within these lines, my love's last gift,
A truth revealed, a fateful shift.

The eyes that grant you the world anew,
Were once mine, in a world so true.
In love, I chose a shadowed fate,
So you could marvel, at daybreak's gate."

Clasped in her hands, the letter shook,
His sacrifice, a forlorn look.
Her gift of sight, now a shroud of regret,
In her world of color, his silhouette.

Once a dream, now a poignant ache,
His love's cost, her heart's forsake.
In every shade, every beam of light,
Lingers the memory of his eternal night.

About this poem

Sometimes people don't appreciate life

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Written on December 06, 2023

Submitted by rickscorpio on December 08, 2023

Modified by rickscorpio on January 08, 2024

1:52 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCBB DDAA EEFF GGHH IIXX AAJJ KKLL FFMM NNOO PPAA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,728
Words 362
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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4 Comments
  • Giselavigil
    Beautiful. Great writing!
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • rickscorpio
    Well bummer. I just read my poem again, it was my final draft. When I copied it over the first time, that must have been my final draft thinking I copied the final over - so didnt reread it., so I edited it to the final version (1/8/24). I makes much more sense. There were only a few changes, just a couple lines, but I think they made a world of difference in the final version. Bummer. Hope people like this final version. 
    LikeReply 13 months ago
    • Giselavigil
      I empathize. It amazes me how I can reread one of my poems a dozen times and it looks fine. Then in that 13th reading, realize I have to change something. It’s all good though because we keep learning and growing as writers. 
      LikeReply3 months ago
    • rickscorpio
      thank you for your kind words and reassurance. You are correct, I always tell people if you're not making mistakes, you're not learning anything.
      LikeReply3 months ago
  • Bev11
    I said "Wow!" after I read this. Great story!
    LikeReply3 months ago
  • nandkishoresrinivasan
    Clear writing style. Effort to produce good work is more than evident ! Good luck
    LikeReply3 months ago

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