cranking my hog

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  noahc_ishere

  this poem is f***ing hilarious

  LikeReply2 months ago
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  janet_1

  I have to say I'm a bit embarrassed that after going through 149 poems, this one still rose to the top and stayed. And I'm a prudish, proper, white-haired octogenarian, Oh, my! But I loved the rhyme, meter, and mostly I thought it clever. It made me lol, and in this day and age, that is a treat. more »

  LikeReply2 months ago
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  luisestable1

  Under the chosen diction there is an explicitness that makes the reading strong, and yes, masturbation is that thing of which the Bible does not say much and minds are split on whether it is sin or not to masturbate. Much has been said on the subject.
  One finds this poem interesting for the subject under treatment. The rhyme-scheme is not bad.
  Good read! more »

  LikeReply3 months ago
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  AIDA

  Wow, your poem definitely has a distinctive and bold style! I appreciate the enthusiasm and creativity you've poured into it. The strong and daring imagery adds a unique touch to the piece. Your use of language and rhyme scheme is quite engaging.
  
  In terms of improvement, I would suggest considering the overall tone and subject matter of your poem. While it's important to express yourself freely in art, finding a balance between boldness and appropriateness can enhance the impact of your work. Exploring different themes or perspectives could also bring more depth and richness to your poetry.
  
  Additionally, focusing on refining the structure and rhythm of your poem could make it even more captivating. Experimenting with different poetic devices, such as metaphors or enjambment, can add complexity and create a more dynamic flow.
  
  Overall, keep pushing the boundaries of your creativity, but also think about how you can present your ideas in a way that resonates with a wider audience. Your willingness to explore and improve your craft is commendable, and I'm sure with continued dedication you'll create even more impactful poems in the future! more »

  LikeReply3 months ago