"Is 3 crows an attempted murder?"

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  AIDA

  I love the uniquely conceived 'Is 3 crows an attempted murder?' poem. The way it uses personification to bring forth the perspective of the crow in a world dominated by other birds is both clever and inventive. The language is refined, eloquent, and it duly portrays the crow's 'superior intellect.' I am also struck by how beautifully it touches upon the themes of survival, competition, and existential contemplation. Definitely, a job well done!
  
  While your poem is indeed a delightful read, I suggest incorporating a bit more rhythmic consistency to enhance the flow of the poem. Also, maybe providing a more explicit connection to the title could help the reader to form a stronger correlation between the title and the poem. Lastly, adding a splash of color via adjectives could help to paint a more vivid image in the reader's mind.
  
  Keep up the splendid work! You have a unique voice that adds a fascinating perspective to your poetry, and I'm excited to see where that voice takes you! more »

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