This Light I Pray”



“This Light I Pray”

Strolling near the water’s edge,
toes cooled by sandy wet caress
I looked out on a painted sky,
that silenced my mind’s noisiness

Purples, pinks, and orange hues,
jeweled canvas did my eyes delight
And scent of ocean salt and brine,
did softly on my skin alight

A caramel sun bade me farewell,
as seagulls cried their sad goodbyes
And underneath a blue moon’s watch,
tears tumbled from my tired eyes

I came upon a rocky wall,
that stood between the sea and sand
I laid my weary body down, and
slept much longer than I’d planned

I woke to sunlight on my face,
that warmed the chill away from me
Seagulls screeched a feeding song,
and fluffy clouds shadowed the sea

But no more were the noises hushed,
nor sunset’s masterpiece in sky
The moon rushed off on morning trip,
and sand between my toes was dry

I turned to face from where I’d come,
and headed back along the coast
In distance, all looked just the same,
as when I left in search of hope-

The canvas bare, no colored hues,
to soothe the soul nor noises calm
I journeyed further passed that place,
until I saw a light beyond…

A light that waited high atop,
a mountain bathing in the sea
I took off running faster than,
the fastest I could ever be!

I swam upon the ocean waves,
that brought me safe to mountain’s shore
Then climbed up to its lofty peak,
-and never wandered anymore

Each day an azure sky above,
at sunset colored gems shine bright
In blackened skies the sparkling stars,
quickstep till sunrise chases night

A sea of multi-colored blues,
glimmers in the sun’s warm glow
Gentle swells that kiss the shore,
sing soothing lullabies below

From that radiant place all is imbued,
with love each hour of each sweet day!
My heart delights, my soul at peace-
for all the world, this light I pray

About this poem

My mind and heart have been flooded with the pain and suffering of so many in our world. This poem depicts my search for an end to the suffering and for individual and world peace. Immersing myself in nature brings me comfort and I hope my poem brings you comfort, and hope, as well.

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Written on October 05, 2023

Submitted by susan.brumel on November 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A XBCB DEXE XFXF XGXG HIXI XCXC XXXX DXHX XIXI XJXJ XEXE DKJK XAXA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,813
Words 369
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Susan Mayer Brumel

I am a retired hospice social worker, who began writing poems about 2 years ago. I am married, a mom of two sons, a Bernese Mountain Dog, and grandma of two grandchildren who are the loves of my life. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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  • Vixility
    Lovely piece as usual, Sue. I love the language and sensory imagery you chose, and I especially love and sympathize with the sentiment of the poem.
    LikeReply 14 months ago
    • susan.brumel
      Thank you. I always appreciate your thoughtful comments, and support. That you were touched by this poem is most gratifying to me.
      LikeReply4 months ago

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