Graziella’s Grace”



“Graziella’s Grace”

I watched her sleeping high upon,
a mattress floating in the air
The sunlight flickered on her brow,
and scent of rose was everywhere

I can not tell how long I stayed,
as she drew in each shallow breath
Or what I may have done for her,
as she was in the sight of death

I do not know if I revealed,
that which was on my tongue to say
Or, from within my grateful heart,
I shared with her my love that day

I listened as the clock struck twelve,
which moved me then to take her hand-
I held it gently as I wept,
and tried my best to understand

How woman once so spirited,
and wise beyond all others wise
Would soon be but a memory,
of one beloved and idolized

I do remember standing there,
my eyes fixed on her peaceful face
For never had I ever seen,
someone dying with such grace

About this poem

As a hospice counselor, I visited with Graziella once a week for nearly two years. She was brilliant, artistic, generous of heart, and the most spiritual person I have ever known. This poem captures my last visit with her just before she died. Many years have passed, but I still feel her spirit in the world.

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Written on November 12, 2023

Submitted by susan.brumel on November 12, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA XBXB XCXC XDXD XXXX AEXE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 812
Words 180
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Susan Mayer Brumel

I am a retired hospice social worker, who began writing poems about 2 years ago. I am married, a mom of two sons, a Bernese Mountain Dog, and grandma of two grandchildren who are the loves of my life. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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