The Beautiful Red Flower



Have you ever been in a garden full of roses at night?
And you saw the most beautiful red flower?
You reach out to touch it
Only for it one day to collapse and cower

Was the flower always destined to die?
Or did you somehow cause its death?
You did your best to take care of it
But in the end, everything takes it’s last breath

How can something so wonderful leave?
Are we stuck in a cycle of beauty that turns to rot?
How did something so youthful just disappear?
To be here yesterday, but for today it’s just not

As the years go by, the garden is now gone
Replaced by rock, steel, and rusted iron
I still remember the beautiful red flower
For she was my lovely crimson siren

About this poem

This about life and love and how some times life can just end instantly (or relationships in my case). The flower represents my love, but now the flower is gone and so to is my ability to want to love another. If I think some nights if I focus enough, I can remember what love feels like.

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Written on September 26, 2023

Submitted by adamroycarrigan on September 26, 2023

Modified by adamroycarrigan on October 03, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABA XCBC XDXD XXAX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 683
Words 143
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Adam Roy Carrigan

I write poetry and it is often terrible. The poetry I wrote previously was so terrible I decided to take a ten year break. However, it seems the decade I decided to do everything but write poetry has seemingly increased my ability to write half-decent poetry. Life is weird. more…

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  • Poeticbee
    Wow I love this. I mean I can tell the same story. Well everything ends one day but we must make the best of it while we still can.
    LikeReply6 months ago

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