Poeticbee
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Wow I love this. I mean I can tell the same story. Well everything ends one day but we must make the best of it while we still can.

Great poem here Adam. Well I do remember a time when I was a different person in secret. I was going through a bad experience and I wasn't true to my public persona. And speaking of rhyming with the same word, it is rather repetition which is a good poetic device as well. more »

thank you for taking the time to read it's meaning. But honestly I didn't consider your hypothesis when writing by ' I'm not in four' I was only referencing that humans are spirit, soul, and body. But what you've said can also read meaning to it. I mean people don't tarry so long with those that don't appreciate them. more »

Amazing poem with a very realistic message.

I usually reflect the day before my birthday on all the passing age has thought me, before celebrating my new age the next day. Great poem

What an amazing poem sir Walters. I hope she's back to being the freshest rose for all eternity.

Thank you for your insight. It is totally different I know, I was just willing to share it as the inspiration came.

I love the emotion conveyed in this poem.

Hello I'm new to this community and I'm guaranteed to love it here