Upon Slovenia’s Shore”



“Upon Slovenia’s Shore”

Stars rained upon
the Adriatic Sea
and twinkle-danced
for all of night to see
Beyond the sky
as far as I could tell
they took away
more quickly than they fell

At glow of dawn
a glorious shooting star
shed brilliant light
upon Slovenia’s shore
That lit the day
far brighter than I’d seen
inspiring hope
for humankind to glean

Then on the blush
of early twilight’s cheek
a peacefulness
that every being seeks
Infused the world
for all of us to share
and spread a joy
that lingers in the air

About this poem

When I was on the Adriatic Sea, I was moved by the natural beauty that surrounded me. It made me feel hopeful, peaceful and joyful that one day our world may be so blessed. I hope I imparted these feelings to those who read this poem.

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Written on August 12, 2023

Submitted by susan.brumel on August 22, 2023

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Scheme A xbxbxcdc xxxAdexe xxxxxfxf
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 529
Words 100
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 8, 8

Susan Mayer Brumel

I am a retired hospice social worker, who began writing poems about 2 years ago. I am married, a mom of two sons, a Bernese Mountain Dog, and grandma of two grandchildren who are the loves of my life. A lover of all animals and most people, I enjoy spending time in nature, long walks, and reading Pablo Neruda, Blake, William Carlos Williams, James Joyce, Mary Oliver, Emily Dickinson, Maya Angelou, Leonard Cohen, and more. Baudelaire tells us to ‘be drunk’ on something every day; I am drunk on poetry and intend never to be sober! more…

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  • Vixility
    Lovely poem, Susan. My imagination, following the poem’s description of the stars, delighted in the vivid verb ‘twinkle-danced’. Some of the imagery also reminded me of the Greek phrase: ῥοδοδάκτυλος Ἠώς (rosy-fingered Dawn). You paint a gorgeous picture as usual. 
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