Helen



I thought I loved my Prince Paris
But my heart turned to brother Hector
Then after I witnessed Achille's strength
I suddenly felt a fresh nectar.

I am the face that launched a thousand ships
With only one life to give
I cannot account for all the lives lost...
That's why I give, and I give
And I give..

Never underestimate
The power of your muse
We can take; re-shape
We can manipulate

That's why we continue to live.

And to all of the men
Who continue to use, and abuse
Their own special Muse...
Those who give, and give
And give...remember that we'll always live..


My name is Helen.

About this poem

My older sister was a lot like this. But her name was 'Dawn'.

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Written on August 15, 2023

Submitted by lovingempath on August 15, 2023

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Scheme XAXA XBXBB CDXC E XXDBE X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 593
Words 125
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 1, 5, 1

Robin Loving

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  • Vixility
    Mythic, Robin! Mythic!

    The poem opens up with poor Helen caught in the center of a patriarchal machine (the male figures) who used her beauty as a catalyst to ignite a brutal war—a war that she wants nothing to do with, as we can hear her desperately cry:

    “I am the face that launched a thousand ships … I cannot account for all the lives lost…”

    I like how you then subtly introduced the Muse (whom mortal Helen seems to have embodied) and a diatribe is set forth warning ‘all of the men who continue to use and abuse their special muse’ (in this case Helen) that they are at the same time dishonoring that which is Eternal in them.

    And then (and I believe it’s still the Muse speaking) the poem ends with the powerful:

    “My name is Helen.”

    Lovely work Robin, lovely work.
     
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