Ellie the Shepherd



I used to pat each nose as I'd walk by their cage
It just seemed like fate, that our brown eyes engaged...
Silently begging for her turn to play
A perky-eared Shepherd was brought in that day.

This once I would start at the end of the line
And leash this girl up for a little play time.
Happy to have me, she led me outside...
A graveyard for sticks and old balls that had died.

She danced in delight with each toss of a toy
Then trotting quite proudly with one chewed-up joy...
She'd rear-up and drop it; stare in my eyes,
Dare me to take it: I would; to her surprise.

Her soft graceful beauty, unmatched in mid-flight
Pierced through the armor, I'd laced-up so tight.
The long dog less months of my mourning would end...
Here was my heart, my new life; my best friend.

She was showing-off now, attempting to cram
Two more balls in her mouth, as she bumbled and ran...
She managed to do it...looked to me for applause
Laughing instead; I grabbed her sweet paws...

And we danced, and we ran, and we almost lost the day,
But the others were waiting for their turn to play.
So I rallied her up, and took her inside...
There were tears in her eyes; I think we both cried.

Those shiny white teeth and the spit on her nose,
The look of pure trust, only a dog-lover knows...
I hated to leave her that night at the Pound,
I stopped in mid-stride, and almost turned around...

I had promised "tomorrow we'll go 'home' to play"...
Labeled 'Aggressive', she was killed that same day.

About this poem

Before the onset of 'No Kill', this type of thing happened often in our local 'shelters'. I became heavily invested in the 'No Kill Movement'...partly as a result of incidents exactly like this and was actually able to make a difference. Thank-you 'Ellie'. You're right here in my heart.

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Written on February 15, 2023

Submitted by lovingempath on February 15, 2023

Modified on April 19, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAA XXBB CCDD EEFF XXGG AABB HHII AA
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,479
Words 308
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2

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3 Comments
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem! Your love and appreciation for dogs shines through every line, and I can really feel the joy and connection you had with this particular Shepherd. The way you describe her playfulness and energy is so vivid and relatable, and I can just imagine how much fun you had together.

    One suggestion I have for improvement would be to maybe incorporate some more sensory details to really bring the scene to life. For example, describing the texture of the toys or the sound of her paws on the ground could add even more depth to the poem.

    Overall though, I really enjoyed reading this and it put a smile on my face. Thank you for sharing your love of dogs with us!
     
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • Symmetry58
    Hello random writer person. This was one I had pinned. The ending about had me in tears. Whoever you are, you have a grand knack for story telling. I hope one day we can be friends.
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • lovingempath
      Hello random poet person. Thank you for your post, and I look forward to becoming friends one day :)
      LikeReply1 year ago
  • FLi
    Hi there Robin, this poem of yours made it to my top 5. It was delicately written yet strong enough to break my heart. Your works are really a good read. :)
    LikeReply 11 year ago
    • lovingempath
      Thank you so much Francelle...Your thoughtful comment means a lot to me :).
      LikeReply 11 year ago

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