A cup of sugar

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



It is raining
and i want to cry

For the love
that i have found in you

That for now at least
i cannot keep

For the dreams
which so sweetly come

In gentle showers
softly, touching me

In a slow-motion parade
of heartfelt desire

It is not sorrow, which brings tears
To my eyes, it is joy in my heart.

No, it’s not a bad thing,

These living dreams
Between anticipation,

expectation

i wait for now at least,
content

as a borrower

Picking up
the few pieces of a dream

i have
This side of forever

About true love and devotion,

In a partnership i’d rather live for
With, rather than…

Without

C2


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Written on September 12, 2005

Submitted by Charles2 on August 25, 2023

Modified by Charles2 on August 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AX XX BX CX XX XD XX A CE BX D XX XD E XX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 642
Words 150
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2

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