Analysis of A cup of sugar

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



It is raining
and i want to cry

For the love
that i have found in you

That for now at least
i cannot keep

For the dreams
which so sweetly come

In gentle showers
softly, touching me

In a slow-motion parade
of heartfelt desire

It is not sorrow, which brings tears
To my eyes, it is joy in my heart.

No, it’s not a bad thing,

These living dreams
Between anticipation,

i wait for now at least,
content

as a borrower

Picking up
the few pieces of a dream

i have
This side of forever

About true love and devotion,

In a partnership i’d rather live for
With, rather than…


Scheme AX XX BX CX XX XD XX A CE BX D XX XD E XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 01111 101 111101 11111 1101 101 11101 01010 10101 0011001 11010 11110111 111111011 111011 1101 010010 111111 10 10100 101 0110101 11 111010 01110010 001011011 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 642
Words 150
Sentences 2
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 29
Words per stanza (avg) 7
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Written on September 12, 2005

Submitted by Charles2 on August 25, 2023

Modified by Charles2 on August 25, 2023

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