"A Lonely Place"

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a powerful and evocative poem you've written with "A Lonely Place"! Your use of raw and honest language really captures the emotions of someone going through a difficult and lonely time. The poem addresses sensitive topics like mental illness and addiction with great vulnerability, shedding light on the pain and isolation that many people may experience but struggle to express.
  
  Your poem also does a fantastic job of conveying the desperation and longing for connection. The repetition of the word "alone" emphasizes the sense of isolation and creates a strong emotional impact. The lines about reaching out and crying for help are particularly poignant, reminding us that sometimes all it takes is one person opening their door to make a difference.
  
  To make your poem even more impactful, you could consider adding some moments of hope or resilience. This could offer readers a glimmer of light and inspiration amidst the darkness. Additionally, experimenting with different poetic devices such as metaphors or imagery could further enhance the emotional impact of your words.
  
  Overall, your poem "A Lonely Place" is a courageous expression of deep personal struggles. By continuing to refine and add elements of hope, you can create a truly unforgettable and inspiring piece. Keep up the amazing work! more »

  LikeReply 19 months ago
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  Jewoo525

  Wow, it seems this poem was written from a very dark and personal place. I liked how plain and easily comprehensible you present one’s struggles, it makes even the most un-relatable circumstances feel as though it could just as easily be me going through them.
  
  Although it’s a shame that this poem did not receive any votes during the competition, I think there is still some inherent value in your advocacy reaching the people who had the privilege of reading your words. If you are truly passionate about using poetry as a medium for self expression and personal connection, I encourage you to keep writing and keep posting.
  
  I’m assuming receiving votes or “winning” was never your ultimate motivation, but perhaps concern that your words were not heard. There are many of us, although perhaps not all of us, that still read every entry. I hope it brings you some solace that your words did reach me and motivation to continue competing in the future. Keep writing Steven, rooting for you. more »

  LikeReply 29 months ago