One of few



The Stars light up when you're in view
I didn't know that you were one of few
You hold my hand throughout the day
That's when I try to keep my feelings at Bay
When you kiss me so gentle and so sweet
I think of it as my sweetest treat
Your eyes sparkle in the Sun
When I'm with you I have so much fun
Although I didn't expect feelings to rise
I couldn't expect a better prize
Your laugh is so gentle and so kind
That's all I can think about in my mind
When I'm with you I don't tell time
That's when I know I'm at my prime
Stars light up when you're in view
Now I know that you are one of few

About this poem

It tells about a feeling when looking to the one I love

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Written on March 16, 2022

Submitted by survivorslife20 on March 21, 2022

Modified on April 26, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCCDDEEFFGGAA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 591
Words 128
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16

Hayley Kristine Miller

I am 28 years old I have always looked for love in the wrong places and I am a single mother of 4 and love is always on my mind and finding the right person has always been my journey more…

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